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action and adventure, liked!

Your story certainly held my interest

I enjoyed this fic. It's well-written and I think you stayed true to the characterizations of the Voyager crew. I've also always felt that Vorik is an under-appreciated character and it was nice to see him featured so prominently. Thanks for writing.

Excellent! I found the subplot about Vorik the most interesting personally, but the rest was very entertaining as well. I love your portrayal of the group dynamic!

I love stories with Vulcans in it. This was a great one. Thanks.

Interesting Vorik part. I must confess that I only scanned through the others. But keep on writing!

ok that was a really good fic . i liked the vorik parts of the story . and the ending was cute .

good job

Whoa, this story is like Tom Clancy does Star Trek Fanfic, lol. By that I mean, very well-written and interesting, but way too many names and things going on at once for me to be able to know what the heck is going on, because I'm bad for that sort of thing. But Vorik and Lyssa got together at the end so I'm very happy. M, Vorik.

I like this story.

Yeah; I absolutly adore Vorik! So please, any more stories about him would be perfectly fine with me. :)

Woho! Another great story. I loved Vorik and his father's conversation. I would like to see what dad says now. I wonder if Lyssa can corrupt him?

Very well done; I really enjoyed it. Vorik is one of my favourite characters, by the way!

Loved the story. Well done, and good luck in the contest.
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TLI

Excellent adventure story with enough good character interaction to make it interesting. Great dialogue also. Very, very nice!