| Reviews for Black Fur, Pure Heart |
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BlizzardWolf chapter 1 . 12/5/2005 Agh, my goodness! This is definately the best Sonic-esque poem I've ever read, great job. I got really caught into it~ keep it up! |
Shere Twilight chapter 1 . 11/24/2005 WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW That was really good! |
shadow'sgirl chapter 1 . 10/25/2004 OMG THAT WAS SO GOOD! KEEP WRITING I JUST LOVE SHADOW HE IS AWSOME! AND SCREW ALL WHO DONT THINK SO! |
Golbezandcrew chapter 1 . 10/20/2004 Golbez: YAY I like poetry Dark: -_- Z Mascara: That was cool! |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2004 That was great! You showed what Shadow really is. This is so good! Please write more fanfics about Shadow...(puppy eyes) |
Ecea chapter 1 . 8/29/2004 OMG! this is a good one. please continue! |
tojadzas chapter 1 . 7/5/2004 This is so sweet!(I think we all agree with ProjectAOD-me especially...I have the picture I drew to prove it!)And rhyming poetry is so very difficult! The only poetry I've ever done is free verse...(all from Tails's POV) that just comes to me. The thing is, this was in chronologic order, amd sported some different POVs...plus it rhymed! And it was all fact, it's so right! This poem, and the last line, reminds me of something I saw recently: Shadow the Hedgehog, the villian with a heart of gold. (I really agree with the last part) Poetry is quite new to your style of writing...and you nailed it on the head! Great job Ryuko! -Pet Isis |
Jodie Takira chapter 1 . 6/27/2004 Well, I figured since ya threw me a review, I'd repay ya and I'd have to say, I'm impressed. In fact, I'm totally astounded by such a well thought out piece of writing! Seriously, I know rhyming is a very difficult task to pull off without making the piece sound stupid, but you really got away with it. Keep it up, dude! Seriously! |
Shadow F chapter 1 . 6/25/2004 ;_; That was such a lovely poem. It shows what Shadow truly is. I HATE ALL THAT THINK HE IS JUST EVIL!*Cries* (Id say more but ProjectAOD pretty much covered it) This was BRILLIANT! |
ShadowEver chapter 1 . 3/30/2004 This is a very well written poetry. I love it, and I hope to see more, the structure is great, and the rhythem is not exaggerated because of the ryhme. Very good. ~*~Shadow4ever~*~ |
ProjectAOD chapter 1 . 3/22/2004 Aww, I really like this! I love Shadow and Maria, such a sweet relationship and Shadow loved her so much( But I absolutely love this poem, most people think Shadow's just all evil but there's so much more to him that that, he's actually kinda sweet |