Reviews for The Lost Shard
Baby-Ritsu chapter 5 . 12/5/2005
this story has a good plotline which is really all that matters but sometimes its hard to read and makes absolutly no sense at all. I dont want to be mean since i think this is a really good story. And unlike some ppl i have no problem with spelling errors. I just hate it when i cant read small parts of such a great story because of weird sentances.

- baby-ritsu

.out.
Laura Schwab chapter 8 . 12/2/2005
yay! It was sad, but everyithing was back to normal right? YEA! KIKYO DISINTEGRATED! WHO HO!
mia chapter 8 . 11/12/2005
aw that was a sad ending but it was a good story nice job~mia~ .
mistress yume chapter 8 . 11/12/2005
*gawks* thats is? but its like an evil cliff hanger! aww, what if you continued it? a sequel maybe? because this is great! and it would be greater if you continued it!
Laura Schwab chapter 7 . 10/24/2005
NO! Is there more? Please tell me! Good job! I want to know more!
sequinrave chapter 7 . 9/12/2005
Was that the end of the whole story cause that was truly sad. Where is Sango and Miruku?
Endless Moonlight chapter 6 . 3/26/2005
THAT'S why she kept the shard? I thought she was just kinda being selfish. That, and so if she ever wanted to go back she could. well, I liked this chapter. sorry I didn' review sooner!
angelicjapgurl chapter 6 . 1/24/2005
Yes! Kagome Finally Relizes!Please UpdateSoon!
Matt the devil chapter 5 . 10/31/2004
hey cassie, plz add on sometime soon. it's good but could use some more added on it
Endless Moonlight chapter 5 . 8/31/2004
I think i kind of get the whole time thing. it makes sense to me...well, that part about kagome going back to her time anyway. ohh, and just fo you know, kagome is only 500 years in the future. feudal japan is around the same time as the middle ages in europe. the spelling wasn't that bad, there were a few typos, but it was still clear what you ment. well, update soon!
jammies2000 chapter 4 . 7/28/2004
This is good update soon please
Endless Moonlight chapter 4 . 6/6/2004
i'm confused...if the feudal era was all destroyed, then wouldn't it effect Kagome's time as well? ohh well. it's really good so far! update soon!
Fiery Demon Fox chapter 4 . 6/5/2004
This was good! _ I think u should keep on going! _
Get a spell checker chapter 3 . 6/5/2004
I can't read this anymore! The horrible spelling and misuse of words is driving me crazy! Is English a second language for you? If so, you should have warned readers before you posted this crap! Good-bye and I won't be back!
Endless Moonlight chapter 3 . 6/5/2004
true. short. but it was good. slight cliffy. is something bad gonna happen to her b/c she went in first? update soon!
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