| Reviews for Jusenkyo Man: All About Eva |
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  Guest chapter 10 . 7/13/2019 cause my buttocks appear large - cause my buttocks to appear large |
| Guest chapter 10 . 7/13/2019 "Kaji's plan" You mention multiple times it being Kaji's plan, but in the last chapter it was Shinji who came up with it. |
| Guest chapter 9 . 7/13/2019 efficiently as possible - as efficiently as possible |
| editing error chapter 9 . 7/13/2019 This whole section was repeated twice: "Commander Ikari, do you know why Kaji's been acting so oddly?" Ritsuko asked her boss as she took a seat for the meeting. "I think he's still a little bitter about that Captain Katsuragi is infatuated with Shinji. That and my son put him in his place." "What do you mean?" Gendo leaned back and smiled at his subordinate. "When captain Katsuragi and my son went to pick up the Second Child, Shinji saw Kaji bothering the captain." "And?" Ritsuko was now intrigued as to what was causing the friction between the two former lovers. "Shinji took offence at that and punched him in the throat. Kaji slipped away during the Angel attack and informed me of his plan to 2C" a male voice told her. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/12/2019 cleaning the in - cleaning in the |
| Guest chapter 3 . 7/12/2019 she fell succumbed to exhaustion - she succumbed to exhaustion to get ready to get her ready for work - to get her ready for work |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/12/2019 You forgot to actually have Shinji say something here, without that, the second part doesn't make any sense: "Oh, Shin-chan," Misato sing-songed as she placed her arms around Shinji's waist. Misato rested her head on his shoulder, revelling in the nervous boy's scent. "Whatever do you mean, Shin-chan?" |
 COBRASTEVE chapter 1 . 8/11/2017 Wow...just wow! |
| Tetris Ex Machina chapter 11 . 10/31/2009 Great story! |
| michael68 chapter 1 . 3/19/2006 I hope Lord Raa writes more. |
| Light02 chapter 11 . 8/8/2005 ok I thought I'd finally sit down and read this arc...I wonder whan Ranma is gonna show up...also the next question is Ranma the one taking out the members of Steele, frankly that committe along with Gendo creeped me out on that factor. |
| tomdj1701 chapter 11 . 7/15/2005 Great story. Please update this one soon. |
| tomdj1701 chapter 1 . 7/15/2005 Just found this though it was great. |
| Dimitri Plabato of The Dark Icon Writers chapter 11 . 7/7/2005 This fic is THE BOMB! Wow, I've never read anything both funny AND have a general plot as well! Keep this up! AnD UPDATE! |
| Erentei Lord of Insanity chapter 4 . 5/10/2005 Whoof! I suggest you move the next chapter's backround to furcadia. Ah, furcadia, the only MMO with r-rated bits... Plus, you can be an animal. **Lord Raa gets nosebleed** |
