I just read through this one and the prequal. They kick ass. I am sad however that you are writing them anymore! If you ever pick it back up you have at least one faithful reader! You made me fall in love with Adam and now he is gone. Sad but worth waiting for!

Hey Katie! That was a good chapter, rather short but nonetheless you finally updated. Broderick? That's a new one on my part. Yea anyway... you get to go to NY? oh man your lucky. I've never been there which is kinda sad considering we're neighboring states. Update soon I've missed this story. Toodle loo ~Jocie~

How can you get a life now! No that you have all this Greatness stared... Katie, you know what I'm not talking to your for... 38 seconds... ALright, done but I'm still mad... Oh well, moving on I did love this chapter. Hmm, I liked Adam's brroding towards the ends, he's such a deep kid, he needs to relax..

Oh and can I mention the love of my life otherwise known as the man himself Averman. I hope he gets Layney, and I hope she's worth straying his pinning from me to her... She SEEMS nice, but that dosent make her nice. Oh oh, and can I ah, you know KILL BOBBY, Please! :Puppy dog eyes: I mean I really want to, and you've been mean latley not updating... So you kind of owe mee... Outside of the fact that I haven't updated in longer lol! Anyway i'll let you get beack to that o so busy life of yours...

Keep up the GREAT work!

Rach

Tsk tsk, excuses, excuses. Just kidding, love you dear! No more really long vacations for you! Or I will badger you incessantly on AIM until you update! Bring notebooks with you to New York!

Great chapter! I will drive the steam train that can hit Bobby! I hope Averman will get the girl. Love, Emmy

Hey Katie!

Wow, are we even gonna get to talk this summer? I mean it seems like you're pretty damn busy. Anyway, to the review... That was a great chappie. A long time coming but great nonetheless! I loved the ending. It was quite deep..lol. Seriously though, I loved it.

Hehehe, I'm watching the Blair Witch.. I don't know if I told you that in my other review or not.. oh wait, yeah, I did. Anyways, hehe, I'm loving it. lol. Hahaha... he's singing America! Oh Good Lord! Anywayz... dude! I have so many things to tell you next time we talk.

Okay, well please update as soon as you can. I understand you won't be able to as often, but that's okay. You gotta give me all the info on your new job too. Hope to talk to ya soon.

Great job chickydoo!

xoxo -Kt-

Hey agian! Aw, i forgive you! HUGS! And yes I do have MSN, my email is ohh, harrasing you at all hours of the day... FUN! Oh sneak peaks, even better!
WHat can I say, I always thought me and Averman were long lost twins. Of course you can link it, I would be honored. I wont be able to post for a little while, were in the process of moving 2 thousand miles away, and I'm busy packing. But I'm excited Arizona should be great!
Moving on, I think I may have to kill Phil... GR!Or maybe your teacher I HATE fairytales, give me good old tension any day...
Anyway in bigger news I'm going to be sixteen really soon... Well June but still GO ME! Anyway I love you dearly but I really need to head to bed I'm getting tired!
GREAT chapter, infact one of your best... Not to mention nice and long with nice Josie/Adam and Adam/Phil tension.. I mean how do you get all this greatness in one chapter?
Rach

kool cahpter keep it up. :) wut happens in the car ride and does his father find out that jay left?

Thank you so much! Woot! i'm gonna pick Fulton up right now .. well that is after I'm done this review! lol. You know what I feel better now that I read your updated chapter. I think u found the cure for the common cold. *hands u a noble peace prize.* Okay I was kinda confused in this chapter. okay like when they didn't finish their sentences. Allright i'm gonna go back and read that quick... *reads* Yea still confused. i'm still a little slow. Dude did you know that like every time the word father or hot was in your story it was hyperlinked? and it went to some page about weight loss. Although it may have just been my computer. It's been a jerk lately. *beats computer* allright besides the part that i was confused on that was a good chapter. Update really soon. ~Joc~

HIDEEHO! 4 days 'til school's out! ...but i'm gonna be homeschooled next year, so I migtht never see justin again. HOW WILL HE READ YOUR FICS? HE DOESN'T HAVE INTERNET! AGH! *deep breath* I'm ok. Anywho, another great chapter! Evil Will. I don't like you, Will. *shakes finger at computer screen* Do you hear me, Will? I don't like you! Evil! Every villan is lemons! Ok, random outburst. He he he. Adam, didn't even leave his bed? He is a lazy ass, isn't he? Oh well, i'm not one to talk. :D Well, there's a math project over there that's not going to do itself. Hm, ya'd figure they'd give you a break on the projects since it's the last week of school. ARG THEM! Oh well. Keep up the brilliance. _

Hey Katie!
Wow, that was greatness! (as always)
Damn, do I hate Phil! I thought MY father was a jackass but.. holy hell! lol. I guess I should really be thankful that I don't have a father like Phil and don't have to keep in contact with the bum that I do call my father. See now, poor Adam doesn't have it so easy.
Candy? Jay tried to bribe Adam with... candy? Are you kidding? Hahahah! Well, I found it pretty damn funny... hehe.. candy.
My freaking God! What the hell is Josie waiting for? They were talking and laughing! Now they can't even be friends? JOSIE! WTF! *cough* uhh.. sry.. I'm good now.
Oh, Will is such an ass... but I'm almost positive that I've said that before. That would be quite an uncomforable ride home too... wow. That would MAJORLY suck.
Oh.. so.. what? You didn't like my long review? Huh? Fine then! I was just trying to make up for the like.. 3 sentence one before but.. if you don't like it.. *sniffles*.. I just thought you'd like it. *cries* Okay well... after I stop crying I'm off to do my homework... ;)
talk to ya tonight!
xoxo -Katie-

I know what you mean about required community involvement. Alot of schools in a the US are making it a requirement also. Luckily, all my work as a girl scout counselor counts for it. Unfortunately, I needed a class to take this term, and since all the other electives my school offered I've already taken or can't take (I can't sing or draw), I was put as a library aide. However, the librarian was too busy yelling at the boys watching Dave Chappelle to notice me web surfing.
Anyway, I loved this chapter just I did all the others. I can't wait to see how the dinner from Hades goes. It's really terrible how fate always seems to put us in situations surrounded by people we want to avoid.
Oh, and I had Ken hack into the school's computer in my story too. Doesn't he seem like the type to do that?
Still loving the Averman! Update soon!

Whee! another chappie! Aww *feels bad for Averman* a date with Laney's boyfriend? *giggles* Poor guy. *feels even worse for Banks* Dinner w/ all those he despieses? Poor Adam. I hope he lives! update soon! -EMily

I won't murder you. *smiles evily* Don't worry... Lol, jsut kidding! Okay, I was sitting here reading Adam's convo with his dad on the phone and I was like, "Omg! He's such a frickin idiot!" And my mom looked at me weird. :D Can't stand Adam's dad. Evil dad. Bad dad. GAH! *deep breaths* Woo, I'm ok! Justin is now a fan! Boo ya! We have accomplished something! I can die happy! He he he. Anywho, that chapter was brilliance, but I can't wait for the next one. Adam, his ex, his friend-gone-enemy, and his enemy. It's like a soap opera, eh? To be continued...!

OMG! That was a good chapter. How weird would it be to spend the night with your ex? *thinks* lol. Did i tell you my friend Nate and I are going to have a sleepover and EGG Daniel's house? We have yet to tell our parents, but that's besides the point. lol. Anyway.. Averman is so funny. He's such a fab character. I loved the whole bit on Julie Roberts. haha. good times. Okay hun, I gotta keep rolling gotta huge project to do for health. The oh so exciting skeletal system. Send Fulton my love. *blinks* yea i'm done. ~Joc~

You forgot... agian... sobs... Oh well, lol, sorry to hear your busy latley, I know how that is. I'm glad your still alive and kicking and dont you worry we'll all harass you until you update agian and agian and agian... Fun huh?
I love this chapter. I love Averman, I might end up asking for some help writing him in my story, seeing I actually got around to posting it. You liked him right? I dont remember, anyway the point is you do him brilliantly... Wait a minute that sounded a little bad... lol...
Him and Bobby sitting in a tree kissing! I love it, not to mention that it was such a sweet first date.
Poor Adam, he needs bodygaurds if he want to live throught this dinner!
I may have to hurt your brother, we'll him and anyone else that stand in the way of my Katie-greatness!
Fab. job!
Rachel