| Reviews for The Awakening |
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Pen2page chapter 16 . 10/17/2013 Lovely. Truly lovely. |
Shadow131 chapter 3 . 6/3/2005 You really just want to smack their heads together and shout "Wake up! You're perfect for each other!" Boy, do I ever sympathize with Leia, in which case... |
Shadow131 chapter 2 . 6/3/2005 Another excellent chapter. I really liked Leia's insigt on what happened when people discounted Luke as a pilot. Can't say I blame them. His stand-offishness despite what they thought was also endearing. |
Shadow131 chapter 1 . 6/3/2005 The...the cuteness...it's overloading my senses...can't breath...dying of cuteness overdose... |
Sharkbite chapter 5 . 2/9/2005 Yeah, this is a good story. The only problem I have is that you make Luke seem like he's in charge. I don't like that. I don't like how look sort of controled her when thay had sex, I just don't like it. She should be more in charge. Otherwise, good story. |
Jayla chapter 16 . 2/2/2005 That was awesome...I was wondering if you still had the NC-17 version? ;) if you do, If you could send it to I'd owe you forever...lol |
Jane Potter Skywalker chapter 16 . 11/14/2004 Wonderful story :D |
Jelp chapter 16 . 10/15/2004 Aw! That was excellent. :-) ~ Jelp |
danny chapter 4 . 9/12/2004 SHIT you have done your homework! Ive got The Last Command on book and you are verry accurate in your story you deserve a prize! Nice writing...excellent! |
Heaven's Reaper chapter 16 . 8/19/2004 Very touching story you have. Love your stories going to read your latest one right now. Wow you write great, seriously. |
Ghostwriter155 chapter 16 . 6/19/2004 This has been a lovely story. Now update EP! |
elfin2 chapter 16 . 6/13/2004 Sappy but fun. |
Sakura19 chapter 16 . 6/13/2004 I loved this story, I hope you continue to write. |
elfin2 chapter 15 . 6/10/2004 It reads like heartache on a colossal level in the making. It should be interesting. |
lurker2209 chapter 15 . 6/6/2004 O...fascinating history! I have to say that I really love your characterization of Luke: slightly insecure and hiding behind his Jedi Master persona. I can't wait for the end of this, and an update to Emerald Price! |