While much of this story confuses me, largely due to its incompleteness, I really like how the characters are written, and their interactions. They are most definitly Slytherins, but aren't portrayed as simply being evildoers.

This is really good; I love the characterizations! Please, please, please keep gong!

I adore thisw story! You've really fleshed regulus out, and the dynamics between all the characters are great! I espesially liked this chapter with the Bella/Maddie thing. Maddening. I hope you update soon.

Wow,that was good. That's just about how I would imagine Bellatrix to have been as a girl. Vicious and spiteful. The story really flows well too. Don't take so long between updates from now on.

PLEASE update soon. this is the beginning of an absolutely amazing story...but it stops so abruptly. you havnt updated for quite a while (obviously just writing a fabulous 5th chapter...)

keep going! or at least email me with the entire plot so i dont spend the rest of eternity angsting about the end of this story.

JM xx

You know, I have been reading this for a time, so I really should review. It's a very good story and I'd like to see you move forward with it. I always love stories about the Marauders and their generation. It's always very touching. Well done.

Reviewed by Devil/paul and not Zimo

Your personal file is so funny i love it and i love this first chapter. I'll read more later. You should check out my story Initial Reactions. I think you'd like it

Hm...weird yet interesting...continue!

Lovely, my friend! Beautifully written.

Well now. That's not your average LJ, Sirius/OC, Narcissa/Malfoy fic. It's... spectacular. Fantastic. Fabulishious. :D Great, I'm gushing, but I love it. You have REGULUS as the main character, for God's sakes! I love it! Amazing, simply freakin amazing. I'd usually ask you to rr my stories, but now they seem so... childish. Ah well, R&R them anyway! (*Shameless selfpromo)

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I read your updates. I like the story. You should update more often.

Very eloguent and origional story! I rater like this new take on Regulus; he's usually the youngest of the Black children and not particularly disturbed by Sirius's leaving. It also seems you've switched the ages of the Black sister from what I'm used to. I've always had Narcissa as the eldest, and this is interesting. To top it all off is this very interesting, complicated plot written beautifully. Keep up the good work!

This is absolutely brilliant. Keep writing, I love your style.

O keep going...

Wow! I really, really, enjoyed that. I absolutely love your style of writing, it's very unique, elegant, and sophisticated. I think you did a great job, and I will definetly come back to read more of this. Update, please! ;) Good job.