so sad

I'm crying. This was so heartbreakingly beautiful and sad.

Despite being heart wrenchingly sad. The story provides a great snapshot into the mind of Cho Chang, her broken relationship with Harry, and her emotional fragility after the year of the tri-wizard tournament. It paints a picture of bullying and how it can get out of hand, but it also examines Luna. The story shows her strength, bravery, and a personality that's uniquely hers. Lastly, though in the background, it shows the subtle but powerful support of friends especially harry. Luna has always been one of my favorite characters, and I always thought the hint of bullying she was subjected to was more pervasive and vicious than shown outright. Wonderful work.

Wow. This was beautiful and sad, and so well written! I was hooked. I love it.

This work is very, very good. I like how you told it from Cho's viewpoint. It made it original. It made it stand out. It also made it poignant. Cho's about face, her realization that it was her apathy that allowed this to continue, her doubts. That's what good stories of made of.

I love your Luna. That wise, insightful exterior hides a frail girl...

Again, all I can say is well done. Such a well done story.

Coyote

100!

Wish you would add a chapter highlighting the punishments of all those involved- please include as much violence and gore possible.\

This was such a sad story- J.K touched on it in the books but I never really know why they would pick on her so much.I loved how you made it from Cho's POV, somehow you made me sympathize with her despite how wrong she was.

Excellent writing, thank you for the wonderful read!

Well, that was a sad story. I had hoped it would continue for a bit longer. Just the small note at the end gave some hope for poor Luna, and I suppose Cho would follow through with her meeting with Flitwick, so you've just left it to the reader's imagination how this would continue... but it would be nice to see Flitwick come down hard on his house and expel at least a couple of students. I almost feel sorry for Cho. How did she make head girl with an attitude like that? Sure, she tried to finally correct it, but for heavens sake, as a Ravenclaw, she should have been smarter than that.

Luna would have been better off in Hufflepuff... they would have protected her much better. Ooh I hate bullies. Life is full of them and there rarely seems to be justice served.

You ended it here? Aww! This was written so well! Our dear, dear strong Luna. This was a very good read.

I like this. I really like this a lot. I mean, I like Luna most, but your Cho's an amazing character. I like watching her emotions and actions unfold. She's so heartbreakingly human, and I mean that in a very good way.

This was so touching. It was very interesting to see it from this point of view. Altough I kind of wish that we saw the people who were harassing Luna punished in some way

ok, you have really hooked me up right now. I hope you will find the time and the will to continue this story at some point.

wow, this is a really great story. It's very well written and it's really quite interesting.

I really like the POV of the story it gives alot of insight into Cho.

overall really well-written, just a few bits that made the story unclear but overall really good.

I really liked that letter from Harry at the end, it was really sweet and did sound like Harry.

Great Job, this story is going on my favorites!

A bit sad, but kind of well-written.

Albeit a bit darker than your usual humorous stories, no less brilliant. This was really great, and I liked seeing the progression of Cho's states.

WOW... the best story i've ever read well for the time being but it was magnificent!