very sweet and nicely written. i'm really in favour of neville and luna, and this story sort of captures the spirit very well

so cuteeee

This was very enchanteing and magical!

That is so cute! I love it so much! I love the repetitive ness you used in the being and end! (Does that make sence ? I don't. Care)

Oh, this is the cutest Neville/Luna story I've ever read! Great job!

This is one of the first fics I've rede and I love it yore reely good at this! :)

I needed fluff and squee-ability and you delivered perfectly! On top of that it's well written and amazing and I love it so much :)

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This was hell Cute! Merlin, you are great at writing! :D

Loved it loved it loved it. Perfect story. You write Neville and Luna perfectly.

Oh my god! I loved that story! It is so cute and sweet and had me awwing and giggling the whole way through! Thank you so much! I very much enjoyed it! I would realy like to read a longer version or any other stories you've written. thank you agian.

This is good. There is one typo at the end where you write 'she' instead of 'he' but otherwise this a sweet, straight to the point one-shot, that is an enjoyable read. :)

Thus was very peachy, very nice. :) Certainly an enjoyable read. You made the story of Neville's long, luckless love life simple and charming, and his eventual romance with Luna even more so. I liked it very much.

OMG YES! Finally a perfect Nargles and Nifflers story - why havent i found you before? 3 xxxxx

Loved it, really. I always liked Neville, especially after reading the 4th book. He is one of the persons who grew most during the entire series. I think he absolutely deserved to be the hero who he proved to be in the Battle of Hogwarts, and in his seventh school year. I think he and Luna are meant to be together.

Although Rowling didn't write it she stated that it could have been a possibility. But in the end she put Neville with Hannah Abott and Luna with Rolf Scamander. I still think they are one of the couples that are simply meant to be. They are perfect for each other. You characterized them wonderfully in this Oneshot, I completely loved reading it. I am also very impressed, as I have never read anything like this before.

(I mean: sure I have read Neville/Luna FanFics or Oneshots, but never before anything like what you wrote.)

It is written greatly, I like your style!

Brightleaf

I thought that this was really really just absolutely adorable :) I loved the insecure Neville, but I also loved how you got Luna perfectly and their romance was so sweet!