This is such a great story, well written and very intersting. You have caputered the characters so well and your oregnal characters fit in so wounderfully with the rest of the story. It seems a shame the story was never finished though I hope one day you get a chance to return to this world you created.

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

So you move from Anime Spiral to Fan Fiction, huh? That's alright, took me awhile to find it though. AS always the story that have written is still keeping me in suspense and is really starting to get good. Don't want it to end though. Anyway yeah I know life can be really involving, not to mention annoying at times too, so I don't blame you for taking so long. Take as long as you want, I really want to finish this story though.

Hello I am a big fan of this fan fic and Have always loved the chapters (and still do). There was just one thing that stuck with me and is nagging at my mind. I know you said Robin and Amon would be a little out of character but knowing how Amon is never under any surcumstance would he not have a fire arm with him. especially if he thought robin would be in danger in anyway. I dont thin Amon would even go to the bathroom without a firearm on him let alone a park. I still love the story but that could have gone a little diffrently.

It better be! this is an evil cliffy! MORE MORE! I demand more! *sobs* don't let anything happen to them!

Update again really, really soon.

I've been waiting for you to update forever and this chapter was good, so update again...tomorrow.

I want to know what happens.

WELL! IT WAS ABOUT TIME YOU WROTE ANOTHER CHAPTER! THIS STORY MUST GET REALLY GOOD AND NOT TO MENTION A GOD ENDING! I I AM NOT PISSED, BUT YOU HAVE BEEN SLACKING A LOT! MY JOB AS YOUR #1 FAN IS TO PUT PREASSURE ON YOU UNTIL YOU FINISH THE STORY WITH A 5 STAR ENDING. OK? I WILL E-MAIL YOU SOON.( JUST AS I DO EVERYTIME YOU WRITE BACK ~darkrose~

why did he leave his arm aside? I think he is getting sloppy

oh girl the suspense is killing me lol. Good job you are defently the queen of the cliff hangers. I can't wait to see how this ends.

OOh! You are evil! Evil i say! I do hope that Robin will once and for all kill the whore and be rid of her slutty-ness herself. Anyways, awesome update! Kei was adorable as usual!

I love this chapter!

From Yunie

pwease KEEP WRITEING!I LOVE THIS STORY IVE BEEN WAITING FOREVER TO READ IT!

inuwitch.-

this story is really great and I hope to see more chapters from you soon. I hope everything in your life is going well for you and I wish you all the best.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

take your time, i know how hard it is. it took me like what...three weeks to read and review this? school is hard but i imagine work is much much harder. i'll be sad to see this end...maybe i should begin writing Searching? lol, great chapter. too bad Rose is dead, i liked her...and i thought that dojima would be a bit more sensitive than that with michael.

AAOTD