Good story the only thing is if she was mean to X-Ray she would get her butt kicked. He's the leader and so the other D Tenters would stick up for him not a new kid. So you might wanna do something about that part. The rest of it is good.

loved it please please update!

baby-cake-love-me (AKA Morgan)

i love it!

you updated! excellent... Eyelids ay whats that about lol?
anyway... great chapter will be waiting for the next!

hehe. i'm happy. you updated. now make me even happier and update again! i liked this chapter also just incase you wanted to no.

I know that movie! I WATCH IT EVERY NIGHT! I don't need a ticket... I've got connections... lol. Well, very good. I like.

YAY! ICE CREAM! **glares at Kai/Rei2getha4eva** MY ICE CREAM! MINE MINE MINE!

I'm mad now. All of my school is singing the crazy song. I sang it for a skit in Drama, and then they all wanted to know how it went. The worst part is they don't even sing it right! No, it's not nearly as annoying when a prissy little barbie-doll sings it as it is when I, the Great Erin, do.
Anyhoot, I liked this chapter- music. But you probably knew I would, seeing as I like music (gasp) I had been wondering about how Shadow would conquer the Demon Showers- Yes! Take it to the warden!
Sweating like a pig- not a good visual. I don't like pigs. Anyhoot, Didn't Emmit or Evan say that once? One of them- they're both a lot a like when it comes down to it.
As always,
Erin
PS: Are you sure that the mayo wasn't rancid? It smelled like it. And then Claire was stuck on the idea that it couldn't have been mayo- no, it must have been marshmellow goo (YUM!) or something. Denial. *Shakes head* Sometimes I worry for our poor camp counselors- but then I realize that they're only insane, and then it's all happy.

this was a great chapter! update as soon as you can! it will make me happy!

intoresting. yes that's spelled wrong on purpose. you reveiwed me, only fair i reveiw you. no offense but the chapters are kinda short. but then i bet you thought mine were a bit long. oh-hey-oh-well. it's funny, almost every story i read the same reveiwers read. Strange . . . oh well. i like it, but are you sticking to the book? i mean, like go where the book goes? that's what it seems like, but (no offense) this is going a bit too slow for me to tell. i'm glad you liked my intro of X-ray. i even said that on my update. i updated twice. dunno if you saw that or not.i got piano lessons now, so i g2g. laterz.
~*~Agent Midnight Shadow signing off~*~

Aha! I FINALLY logged in! See, I'm not so lazy after all.
Anyhoo, loved the last part. Ugh... mayonaise. It was bad enough when it wasn't rancid (and I strongly think it was in this case)
You know how I'm normally hyper, like, SEP hyper, singing songs and everything? Well, yesterday there was a lot more singing than usual. It was something along the lines (well, exactly along the lines) of "I am slowly going crazy! One, two, three, four, five, six, switch! Crazy going slowly am I! Six five four three two one switch!" And then you repeat and go faster. What does this have to do with reviews? Well, at first glance, nothing. But, see, I was on a bus for a school field trip surrounded by SANE people, and so I sang that song, and this brought some much-needed insanity back into my life.
The-Erin-Who-Logged-In

ok im reviewing so wheres my ice cream? . lol... anyway another great chapter! will be waiting for the next one

Ew.. icky food! Cool chappy tho.
YAY ICECREAM! BWAHAHA more sugar!

Oh that; in your first chap the formatting was all scrunched together.
That is sick; mayo dripping from a sandwich. *shiver* I agree agree with Shadow.

goody! You updated! Mayonaise is nasty! Plch! P Well, I've gotta go... Oh yeah... I WANT MINT CHOCALATE CHIP ICE CREAM!