Very cool story i give it a A plus on this story i love it

keep up the good work

this is good!but i'm confused. i mean wouldn't kagome have used her "true form" to kill naraku?

good story

so cute

Its an enourmous feather and great story! I hope Kagura and Sesshomaru do NOT get together...I will get overly pissed off if that happens...but, then again, its yours story!

Now that is so so sad...almost - ALMOST - made me cry! Good work!

Wow this is a great story, just read all of it, couldn't put it to the side ;D. Good work.

please dont be offended by any comments made:

good layout. the seperation between dialogues make it pleasent to the eye. good seperation between the lyrics and fiction contents.

interesting idea although it wasnt the most original, a bit was repeated before, but its still quite original.

i found the part about kagome being 'lengendary miko of light' a bit weak. there was no explaination of why she was that. it might make more sense if you said she was 'the ultimate miko' or something because that was already kinda explained when midoriko told Kagome her powers.

the plot was kind of strecthed and some parts were clearly explained.

i enjoyed the ending, although it was predictable everyone loves a happy ending espeacially when it ends with such lovely words.

overall rating: 8.6 out of 10

Hey! Great fanfic! The part where Kag became a sexy hanyou was delightfully funny, and yes, you definitely ShOuLd do a sequel. Y, u ask? CUZ I SAID SO! I mean, no offense, but its kinda corny to say they lived happily ever after till the end of time, so shouldn't you write about wat happens later? Please? U owe it to your adoring fans, like me! Think on it. TNT (till next time)!

awesome. i loved this story. added it to my favorites.

Sexi its me meaghan! I want you to read my story! its called me agiasnt the world its rugrat faic. but anywayss. i read the story. i im not gonna lie i didnt not under stand it but anys i miss you!

Meaghanx3

This story was so sweet and romantic. You should have an epilogue, though. I would like to read what their children would look like in this story. Anyways, it was a good story, and good job.

Great job writing, it was a great story. Keep writing!

Cute. I like the ending. I look forward to more fiction by you.