Nice!, so sweet, enjoyed the surprise at the end there.

Lovely!

Its a brilliant piece. You played perfectly with the emotions. I love this story!

Well, that particular stallion is at least unlikely to throw her...

Frostless

Great story

Very nice one piece. I always love well written stories of eomer and Lothiriel. I see you have written more, I will read them.

Ahhhh I love it. At first I thought she might be pregnant and distressed, so imagine my surprise when that turned out not to be the case! A wonderful little one-shot and well written. I love the relationship between Galwyn and Éomer. You established it very well.

Such skill! I'd given up hope with fanfiction, I couldn't get away from the marysues and the... other stuff that now runs rampant through most of the LOTR faction. But this ... mastership? Yes, it is just that; has rekindled and outweighed the atrocities I've witnessed.

Thank You for being part of that now small percent that still wields talent.

You write wonderful stories. Thank you.

Love it!

Wow, i love this. Its sensual, funny, and touching. It makes me like Lothiriel a lot more...it seems every story i read about her she is a combination of a Mary Sue and a "weak female", alwasy cowering and weeping for Eomer to save her. This however, makes me appreciate her and Eomer together.

Anyway, this was good. I loved the strengh in her apology, her efforts at learning swordplay, and her confidence with Eomer. ]

Happy Writing!

-G&B

Great job! I really enjoyed it. It was really funny and sweet.

Fun story. I like the characterizations of both Eomer and Lothiriel- Eomer's frustration was completely in character for him, and the way I picture Lothiriel, I could definitely see her deciding to train in the use of weapons like many of the women of Rohan. And I could just see the look on his face at the end... it's cracking me up!

I loved this story too! That was sweet of her, wanting to be more like the women he's grown up with all his life. *sigh* I love these Eowyn/Lothiriel stories...there are not enough of them online. :)

wonderful story! I completely enjoyed it! well done!

~Mellon