So beautifully done. The writing style really showed the detachment(is that spelled right?) in the dialogue and forced the reader to see what was underneath it all.

This was so sweet, funny and poignant all at the same time! Your writing style is truly to be envied. We really enjoyed this piece!

Very introspective...I like! -

i really liked it,shinpachi was funny,the way he kept on stepping on hiesuke's foot..lol..and the end where sano said the thing about the bowl of rice,..lol...i can just imajine shinpachi asleep..n_n...so kawaii!

Not sure if I'm allowed to make broad generalisations... but I think I'm in love with your writing. Bittersweet is the best word for it so far, but it doesn't quite cover everything. You've rendered me speechless. I'll go now.

ah, that was so cute! hey, sanosuke was kinda philisophical! i love those three, especially sano! good job on the story, its good to know that those 3 will never change. makes me happy.

Beautiful and touching :)

K, you dripped symbolism through out this entire fic. Wonderful, simply wonderful. Keeping everyone still in character and still being able to use that amount of symbolism is a great feat. Great job! i really enjoyed this.
Mystic

Lazy to sign back in again. *sheepish* But as I've mentioned before, I love your writing style, and especially adore the bittersweet ending to your fic. *snuggles*

Wow. I love the style you wrote this in.

It's beautiful but it was a bit hard to read because there were no quotation marks to signal speech. But great job. I'm touched.