Cloud should get hit with raw Mako during an attack on Shirna protecting Rufus, Reeve, Sephiroth, or someone else of high rank by throwing himself in the way of it. Good story by the way.

I love the story so far and id love it if you continued it. The plots is really interesting so far, but ive been wondering is this an AU or just another interpretation of the game if some this were a bit different, im curious. But something is bothering me, Zack seems a bit like a mild sadist and a little malicious but the scene were hes mad about circumstances he didn't have control over and he tries to ignore it/ deny its there is spot on. One last question, is there going to be any pairing? I Hope you continue I love the story so far and id love it if you continued it. The plots is really interesting so far, but ive been wondering is this an AU or just another interpretation of the game if some this were a bit different, im curious. But something is bothering me, Zack seems a bit like a mild sadist and a little malicious but the scene were hes mad about circumstances he didn't have control over and he tries to ignore it/ deny its there is spot on. One last question, is there going to be any pairings? I hope you continue this story it truly is great

This story NEEDS an update! :)

I've always been one to have too much hope, so you can find me waiting for a new chapter. This story is amazing, it certainly has an interesting plot, and we haven't even gotten to far in, hm? I can't wait for more, so I really do hope you update soon.

now this is a very interesting story I would love to read more

:D

this fic has been an interesting departure from all the other cadet!cloud stories out there :)

I really hope you'll update this again someday *u*

Yep! I am another one who just read this story and wish more was written. I want to know why Cloud's father did what he did to him. Sooo maybe I get to read more.

Love it! Hopefully now that he's off the pills Cloud will be a lot more friendly :) Eagerly waiting an update

Great story so far! Are you going to update at all?

plz continue plz plz plz plz plz plz im begging u :o( *gets on knees*

So far so good! But is that the same Cloud who could keep up with Zack in a mountain blizzard? Because I'm pretty sure that's not puny.

Zack really should be supervised in EVERYTHING that he does! Man! He is definitely up to NO good!

Aww, this story's been really interesting so far. It's a shame that you're not updating anymore :(