Your excessive use of analogies becomes annoying after a while.

I abolutley loved this! Not gonna lie i actually ended up mildly disintrested in the plot cause I have a short attention span but I loved Kanyze and Ziba (i spelled names wrong oof) but fr. Good job!

I kind of understand why he wouldn't have children with Rin, but still...

I've really come to like Kanaye. Sasha is still a little stupid, but not everyone can be bright, right? I didn't like Lien... Because I felt like she was trying to give Kanaye a lesson, and how and why do we think we have the right to change people?

I don't want Kawahira to die, his only problem is his father. Also, poor Elif, she was sad till the end

I really like Kawahira. He'll be devastated to learn about Elif's death.

Kanaye is so... Uncouth. Hahahahaha

I'm glad he's so patient with AshItera. She'll be his daughter, right?

It just felt so painful and relieving when he apologizes to his father... Sesshoumaru, again, is such a complicated and deep character that I'm pleasantly surprised at how well you handle it.
BTW, I did want that sex scene to happen Hahahahahaha

I really enjoy your story. Sesshomaru is such a complicated character to write, and yet, you're so badass as to create another complicated character and make it work. I'm amazed.

You know, I never disliked Elif, I just thought she was... Sad. Because I can understand when you fall in love with someone and that person doesn't feel the same. I understand the desire to be something...

Their love has to excalate, right? I think Kanaye is trying too hard to survive, loosing part of himself in the process, so, he must be scared.

Hahaha I love their bickering

I think he's giving in... Hahahaha

I believe Rin wil suffer because of Seeswhomaru's indesition .