I loved it

loved it

I want to say this is a really good story I really enjoyed it but my only complaint is last few chapters do seem slightly rushed but on the other hand it was still a great story.

Sorry. I have to bow out with Gohan who beat cell and could blow up the world being beaten by some waiters. Perhaps if he was drunk first or actively trying to get himself hurt.

Omf i read lml 3rice and read this story 2wice the new chapters rock! I love ur stories! Y was lml booted off though?

Lime DBZ. Ranma Ranma 1/2? Botan Yu Yu Hakasho! Mai and Sasami idk where they are from...

personally I'd go with Lime or Botan, although how a Grimm Reaper can die idk.

I read this whole story in one sitting, took a couple hours and there were parts that made me laugh. But when you talked about how Pan's Mother was going to dump him, that was emotional torture, you do that again and i'll never read one of your stories again. Speaking of which, you should update [REVISED]Low Man's Lyrics. Also, you said you weren't going to give her a name because she wouldnt be mentioned much, but she was mentioned ALOT and you should have given her a name, and you said that Fi Fi was too close to the mother's name so now I need to know her name.

I'm not saying this story is bad, but your writing has really improved since this one. Through the Ghost is so much better.

You are by far one of the best Gohan fanfic writers out there. This and The Alarming Sound of a Still Small Voice are the two best fics out there and I'm just surprised that it isn't ranked any higher in reviews or favorites.

Wonderful story with a happy ending :)

In the first paragraph you say there's a problem no senzu bean can fix, and that Dende can't heal...Then proceed to describe a problem both of those things can fix just fine.

I loved it smile dip

really good story

loved it :D

"When Videl was about ready to give birth, Gohan had a panic attack and passed out." First of all, I found this part hilarious. I started laughing out loud when I read it. XD Not only is it funny that he passed out, but it's just so straight to the point and only makes it funnier.

And I can't believe that she was gonna dump Gohan! D : Poor him... At least he's got Videl now.

Pan's certainly a teenager. XD She's pretty funny. Especially how she'll rant about Gohan when she visits her.

Speaking of visiting her, I got a little misty eyed when Gohan started crying and stuff. It was just so sad. ;-;

Anyway, this was definitely a wonderful story, and different from the normal Gh/Vi stories out there. It was just... so great, and I'm sad that it's over. BUT YEAH ALL-IN-ALL IT'S BEEN JUST AWESOME

GOOD-BYE ;o;