Loved your story . Maybe only little too fast? Oh well, it's not my place to command you ;) Hehe, I'm happy we're not living in the pokemon world, only to be killed off. Oh, well as I said I still like it. And keep it up girl!

AMAZING~! I loved it! It was kind of sad, but sweet. And you know things in here are right, but this isn't the pokemon world so it can't really happen that way . but still love the fluffy-ness!

ash got luky in this one really lucky he got to live forever with out entering sleep of death

wow! I love this story! Lance is my favorite! Update update update!

Wow, fantastic story! 3 Lance is so sweet-semievil in this.I didn't think pairing would be any good but you changed my opinion completely. Any chances to read more Lance/Ash (or someone else with Lance _or_ just Lance fics) from somehwere?

*goes to fav*

I just started reading today and I usually don't care much for Shounen-ai but this story is very interesting.

NOTE! Mirror my Reflection is now complete on my webpage, so please go there...

I'm really confused of the bio thing... nobody's seen him? who?

I didnt read this before... I like it... new twist

Bwahahahaha... Oh the possibilities..

Another great chapter. Keep up the great work.

This is very good. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

I've read Pokemon Adventure, it's really good. Another awesome chappie!

A very good story. So far I don't see how it will be championshipping unless Lance somehow gets free, but I guess it could happen. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the great work.

Is Claire really Lance's sister?
Good idea for your fic, btw. _ Very original.