I love it.

Wow. I'm reading lots of your fics right now, and that seems to be all I'm able to write for any of them. They are all amazing, especially this one. I love this: "He brushes a kiss to your cheek and turns away, walking fall back onto the bed with a sigh, feeling dirty, used…broken." I don't know why. Because I'm insane, but the emotions were...wow.

Yes, the chaotic and bleak part worked... I like it think you should write more

Hmm. Haunting and bleak. I'm not sure if I like it (I don't know if I can see Ray or Lily going for the whole 'friends with benefits' concept), but you hit your mark of chaotic and bleak. Sexy, too. You know, in a dark, messed up kind of way. :)
And sucks big balls. Don't let it get you down, lol.

I really liked this. :) Nice job!

this is so pretty! i'd call it more like poetry than a story, but i don't really care, it's beautiful. Lily and Ray all the way!

yay! i love it when you write RFR fics for me! wait, i take that back, i love it when you write RFR fics, period. i wonder how many RFR tapes it will take before i can get you to officially join the fandom... XD! anyways, awesome job, as usual, i really do love the 2nd person thing, and i think the whole 'friends with benefits' idea was a stroke of genius. now, quick, go watch another tape, and write me another story!