I hope you finish this story. I really like Persephone’s character and I kinda hope she gives Hades hell before she forgives him. Also, turn Minthe into a plant ASAP cause I really hate her.

Good writing :) keep it up

Oh wow. I hope there will be more. This is really good.

Please continue this story!

Your story I love it so much. The way you paint Hades' and Persephone's character is a breath of fresh air. I hope this doesn't come as disappointing but it is just my personal testament of how I love your story: I have placed faces to your characters. What do you think of Ben Barnes as Hades (from Narnia: Prince Caspian) and Emily Browning or even Kate Bosworth as Persephone. Just for fun :) But I do love your writing and take on the story and can't wait for the next chapter!

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OH MY GOD! (Ha, ha, did you get the pun? XD )
I love this SOOOOOOOOO MUCH!
Please continue, I love how much emotion your putting into this - it's sooo beautiful and heated.
The POV's are killing me (in a good way)
I will comment more, later on
To be continued...

YOu need to right more
Like right now

ok that was simply the best fanfic i have ever read XD
you had me hung on every sentences.
hades and persephone is my fav story i would love it if you completed it XD

are you sure the rating shouldn't be M?

Amazing! I love the way these characters are described. Absolutely beautiful and well-written.

x. Ara

This is simply amazing. I love the writing style and how well the words flow :)

Would be great if there was more... but then again it seems almost complete the way it is.

Great job.

Really well done! This was really well written!

I know it has been an long time since you updated that fic, but I really love it and would like to know what will happen next. So please come back with an update, alright?

Very descriptive, I especially liked how you mentioned Menthe in the story, you have been doing your studying! L.O.L. Your choice of words was good too. I had to look up the definitions of a few. I enjoyed reading this, well done, you had me hooked and I know I shall read this story again!

More, more, more! I want more! Update soon, please. :D