So sweet reunion...

Please continu.

HOORAY!You come back!

I love the idea of Lunch in saiyan/pto armor

It would be funny if once things get down to it, Raditz doesn't actually give a damn about anything other than getting "his" woman back.
The way this is going, though, it looks like he's going to get his ass royally kicked.

Oh good there is ChiChi!

I'm so excited about this story.

I've read all of it and it reads a tad confusing at parts. Otherwise, this is a good idea and I like this pairing.

I was hoping you would continue the story. It's great. I'm really intrigued.

O. M. G this chapter rock!
I like your style . You a great writer.

To be quite frank, I'm impressed. I've read the whole thing and I'm intrigued where it is going to go, because I have no idea. You can capture the ambivalence of situations really well and while it is a really dark story it does not appear as edgy over-melodramatic at all. It just draws deep into psychology of people in terrible situations. I really like your interpretation of Planet Trade and Saiyans relations within it. It is very interesting and I can see it being like you've pictured. I really hope to read more, but I don't want to pressure you. I understand very well that writing is hard. You are doing really well. Take your time.

It... it lives?
Yayayayayayayayay!

Aaaaand that explains why Capsule Corp didn't miss a beat when Vegeta moved in. Keep them fed, exercised, and hope they don't eat anyone. Weird dreams, but interesting how things are being drawn together! I enjoyed the chapter.

Holy crap, you're back! I've honestly forgotten everything that happened in this story, LOL. The last time I reviewed was 5 years ago. I'll have to go back and read everything from the beginning, which I'm completely fine with. These last couple chapters have been delightful though, I'm thrilled to see updates.

Whoo hoo! An update! I'm glad to see Chichi at least attempting to kick ass in the face of kidnapping. Are we going to have a training montage now, or skip to the big fight? :)

I dont like too much fighting scenes as it distracts me but i think it was pretty good. Cant have too much but not too little. Cant tell if raditz "likes" Lunch or not so i think ill re read this again.