Reviews for Dance the Forbidden Dance
LadyRaider92 chapter 18 . 6/30/2015
Well heck... if Yami and Teana broke the law and your planning on killing them anyway does it really matter they die in the desert or not...
I don't get the pharaoh's reasoning... he is a hypocrite and cold... his own wife is not fully Egyptian (and as far as I know wasn't royalty either) so why does it matter if Yami fell in love with Teana anyway? Why go through the trouble of looking for them if they already decided to punish them with death?
I don't get it ... especially since they just got Yami back from the dead... so it seems that all of the trouble that happened to get Yami back from the dead was in vain.
LadyRaider92 chapter 15 . 6/30/2015
Welll... that was interesting... that is great that Yami is back but now what is going to happen next.
LadyRaider92 chapter 13 . 6/30/2015
I love the baby chapter... but I still hate that Atem died ... wonder how this is going to play out.
kitanalao chapter 18 . 1/17/2015
hmm... nice continuation...i love it...
kitanalao chapter 17 . 1/17/2015
waw... hard drama i love it.
kitanalao chapter 16 . 1/17/2015
ohh... i love the progress in this story...
kitanalao chapter 15 . 1/17/2015
waw... nice event again. i love it.
kitanalao chapter 14 . 1/17/2015
waw... intriguing event . i never though of this ofcourse... i love it...
kitanalao chapter 13 . 1/17/2015
aww... cute chapter... i love it.
kitanalao chapter 12 . 1/17/2015
oh... nice development... eventhough this is sad...
kitanalao chapter 11 . 1/17/2015
i know this will happen... though situation... i love it...
kitanalao chapter 10 . 1/5/2015
hmm... so much intense battle. i love it . sadly i have to stop now.. but i'll be back latter see you...
kitanalao chapter 9 . 1/5/2015
hmm... intense chapter... it...
kitanalao chapter 8 . 1/5/2015
again... nice progress. i love it.
kitanalao chapter 7 . 1/5/2015
waw... you must be do a lot of research for this story... hmm... good job with the idea...
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