| Reviews for Too Far Over the Edge |
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   Tryndamer95 chapter 7 . 4/13/2019 Daam 10/10 |
| KHfan22 chapter 7 . 2/27/2019 You've done this incredibly well! I was around for the old version of this story and I did enjoy the plot you were going for. It's an absolute joy to reread this and no doubt I will probably reread it over and over again because IT'S. THAT. GOOD. Cheers and patiently waiting~ KHfan22 |
| nick00712 chapter 6 . 9/9/2018 wow... that was dark! Extremely well written, everything flowed so well! This chapter was extremely close to M rating so maybe update the rating to M! Looking forward to the next chapter! |
| alt3 chapter 6 . 9/9/2018 I haven't even read this chapter yet and I'm so excited! I started reading the previous version of the story ages ago and while there were some things that might have made you cringe, I loved it! - So after reading this chapter, I'm really interested in seeing how the story will change further, especially when it comes to Riku. I see what you mean about changing the rating and I really don't know where I stand with that? Maybe make it mature just in case? in any case I can't wait until you update next but take the time you need to write the story you want to write :D |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/7/2018 Brilliant as always. Yeah, this was getting close to the M line. It’ll be your choice on whether to switch it, but let us know one way or another. Personally, I feel the overall tenor is usually around T (which can encapsulate quite a bit) with the odd spike towards M. I feel you can repeat what you did and give us fair warning, you should be good. |
| jaffa3 chapter 3 . 7/4/2018 Yes Kairi that was great! Should have punched him again |
| what-a-wannabe chapter 5 . 6/24/2018 I liked this chapter a lot! Everyone feels a lot more like actual people. Atleast I don't remember the old version feeling so real. Hope you get what I'm trying to say :D Just that your writing has improved! |
| Foreteller Ava chapter 5 . 6/23/2018 Sora and Kairi were both childhood friends? Admittedly I don’t remember a lot of the original but definitely an interesting thing that I’ll remember in the future. I liked the heart to hearts though. They were nice. |
| Q-A the Authoress chapter 5 . 6/23/2018 I do like where this is going and I am looking forward to the next revised chapter. Keep on Writin' and Rockin' |
| Guest chapter 5 . 6/22/2018 Well, look here. Your setup for Tidus and Yuna has MASSIVELY improved. Most of the time, there’s just been layers of polished added to the original version. Although you’re still building it, the same applies in a smaller way to Sora and Kairi. This time, I can gladly say you have fundamentally made your story much better than before... and it was fantastic before. |
| Foreteller Ava chapter 4 . 4/16/2018 Oh right, the start of Sora starting to change and becoming a better person. Good. XD |
| Q-A the Authoress chapter 4 . 4/15/2018 I remember this chapter slightly. It's still sad to read how Kairi lost her parents. Keep on Writin' and Rockin' |
| ttwings chapter 4 . 4/15/2018 Yeees, an update! I'm so glad this story is getting re-done. It's one of my favorites, and I remember it taught me a pretty valuable lesson about forgiveness when I was younger. Can't wait to see more! |
| what-a-wannabe chapter 4 . 4/15/2018 The earlier chapters felt the same but I think the part where Kairi is sitting alone was a bit different? It's been a while since I have last read this story. But I remember that even then I liked that scene and I liked it a lot now too! You really left this chapter in a cliffhanger :D I really wanna know what happens next! I can't remember :D I'm really excited to see how the story is gonna change as we get farther into this! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/14/2018 And we’re back! Thanks for another update. Look forward to Kairi and Sora smoothing things over, alongside Kairi figuring out her emotional state. |
