Finally there is some cloud and tifa not miguel and tifa...in 22 chapters 20 chapters are miguel tifa-tifa miguel dat guy is noce but that nice...i mean c'mon cloud is shy but when he finally go to admit his feelings for she turn to miguel...after so long he returned for her and she was so happy to have him again but dn suddenly ur story drifted to miguel why...n in last 2 chapters they both finally come to senses...n dn where u left...seriously not update for that long we r sooo stuck up...just update soon

Your story would've been way better if you focused more on CloTi and less on your OC, Miguel. I've read up to chapter 16 and Cloud and Tifa barely have had any interaction, not to mention the fact that she's sooo stuck on Cloud since he left and has been thinking of him 24/7 but he comes back and the first day he's back she's out with Miguel. For someone so stuck I would've expected her to at least try to speak with him when he woke up.

Hey hey hey. I think you should continue this fic its so freaking good! And I hope you will continue/update soon although it has been quite long yeah :( do update alrights!

Great story jessie it was amazing from chapter one all the way to the end

It's such a shame this story has been untouched for many years - one word sums this story: Amazing. Utterly, undoubtly one of the best Cloti fics on the net. The confession of their love to eachother to then be cruely taken away - to the twist of the Turk's - AMAZING. You write Tifa & Cloud unbelievably well.

Fiiiiinish the story and justify your beautiful fic!

Please finish! Amazing!

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Hello?

Just want to say that I miss your story... It has been 4 years since you update this. Are you still alive?

I really love to know what will happen next... update please?

PS : Your stories ARE amazing... :)

_Izky_

damn you why did you kill miguel! :'(

I'm really liking the story! Hope you have a chance to continue it soon.

nice

Wait! You rend my heart, and then you LEAVE? Come back and finish the story! Come back... *sob*

I knew it was him! I had guessed who Dylon was in the previous chapter, when he was talking to Tifa in the chamber...

This is AWESOME, I love that story to bits. A few times I thought Cloud was a little more talkative than he usually is, what with the part where he expresses his feelings so much, but it didn't bother me that much given that I was completely enthralled by the story, to the point I couldn't stop reading once I'd started. Like a drug. And now I'm done, and I still have tons of stuff to do and no time to do them, but it doesn't matter because, boy, was that fic one hell of a read! I really like the way you built the plot, with the Turks and all, the many other characters you introduced like Miguel, and Sofia, the little boy at Fort Condor...

The little snapshots into our heroes' past were great, the part about the picture of Cloud and Tifa, and the part about Yuffie and her birds and bees, those rang very true. I love the way you characterize Barret, Cid, Marlene, and all the others... Vincent especially, I was cheering in the beginning when I realized it was him in Fort Condor!

I really hope you'll continue with this, especially since it kinda feels like you were nearing the ending... I'm not really one to talk, since I sort of did the same with one of mine, but still, it would be nice to see them together again! Please, don't forget that story, it's been a while but it's too good to be left at that!

Kudos,

Marine

Once again writing to say that it was AWESOME! I totally loved the ending to the chapter and I'm glad that you shortened Dylon's story. If nongamers really don't understand it, they can just find info. online. Don't be afraid to up the rating either. You instincts for this story have been good so far.

OH MY GOD! This fanfiction RULEZ! Please write more. I so want you to finish this. I love the storyline, and especially Reno turning good. Aw! The whole Miguel thing made me cry... that and Tifa and Cloud. I seriously would like some Tifa/Cloud love in the next chapter. Thank you for being awesome. Please post next chapter soon.