I've read this quite a few times and it's got a rather good plot. But, you should definitely get a beta reader and repost the story.

wow. i was surprised to read my old reviews here and somewhere along the way they stopped. a lot has happened. and here I am in 2017 reading the last chapter. kudos to you for updating this till the very end. I have a gravitation fic that I have stopped updating unfortunately. I like how you ended things and to watch Eiji turn into the monster he always was. I know this is a plot driven fic but I'm curious about his story. also what became of Tono?

Okay honestly now, as someone who speaks Japanese fluently, the unnecessary Japanese words are completely annoying and in some cases used wrong. Next time, pro tip, only use english in an english book. Otherwise, the story is okay. No complaints.

The Japanese is really irritating...

Yoroshiku means pleased to meet you. Having them say pleased to meet you and Yoroshiku I'd redundant.

Such a good story. This is one story i could read over and over again and not get tired of it.

omg I kinda wished Eiji "accidentally" fell off the cliff or something similar. As usual, a well developed story but you left out something huge xD Other readers might have already pointed it out and it is already complete, but you forgot about Aizawa and Toru :P It is fine, you should focus on your Finder Series fanfiction!

I finished re-watching Gravitation today and got bored. Then I decided to go find some fanfiction. I was scrolling down the top favorite Gravitation fanfic when I saw your name. I didn't know you wrote Gravitation too and I just had to read it because I love your writing!
When Toru appeared here, I just thought of the Toru in your Finder series fanfiction xD You must have a liking to the name Toru lol So far loving this fanfiction but hating on people already such as Eiji and Aizawa.

This was a great story and I enjoyed reading it. I love Tohma's character and I think you did him justice. Great job!

Don't worry people. I'll kill him the moment he steps out of jail. Let's see shotgun,pistol,throwing knife and ahh Sniper!

Your from the eastern hemisphere aren't you? Cool

Please write a sequal like when eiji escapes

Started reading it just earlier this day and I'm already hooked!
I wanna say to Eiji that serves him right whenever he sees Yuki and Shuichi together haha...

super awesome story! the best, first ever gravitation fic I've ever read! lol XD

I just wanted to say thank you very much for finishing it. It needed the ending and you made it happen.

Thanks again.