I wish there's a sequel to this story! It had such a great promise! I just really love J/I and they deserve happy endings. LOL! Great job with this story and all your others! :)

Did you decide on a name for Baby Boy Bristow? I'd be curious to know.

Well then. That's a rather interesting change of events...

That was great! I know you wrote this ages ago, but any sequel out there?

Awesome! Love it! It's so bittersweet... you've definitely captured the essence of Irina and Jack. I loved your interpretation of teenage Sydney-has her daddy wrapped her little finger doesn't she? The blending between reality and illusion was done masterfully. Really want to no more about Baby Bristow. Loved how it's a boy... with genes like that, he's gonna be a cutie when he grows up :)

Great job!

Is the sequel up or when will it be up?

This was great! I love J/I. When's the sequel coming?

Love the story! Are you gonna write a sequel?

This is a really good story! Please post more soon!

aww, this story had an amazing premise. i believe this was a cop-out ending. you could always decide to lengthen it...nevertheless, craftily written. i love the fresh ideas you have. thank you.

I really like your story. Write more soon!