| Reviews for Love or Pretend? |
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Kosmos chapter 7 . 11/4/2012 THIS IS DRIVING ME INSANEEEEEEEEE |
Satipheen chapter 20 . 10/21/2012 I LOVED IT! I really would have posted a review at the end of each chapter but I was just too eager to get to the next one. And OMG Chapter 18 Moment of Truth I must have ran screaming from my laptop about five times; no joke. And then after the hyperventilating had died down returned to the screen and read again. I love how you write and everything about this story. And maybe it's just me but I like how even though Yugi is innocent etc that we get to see a little darker side to him like through his jealously. And Seto Kaiba you evil sexy trouble-maker! And of course...Yami? :O |
Ivory chapter 15 . 7/13/2011 I JUST KNEW IT WOULD BE KAIBA! I DON'T KNOW HOW BUT I KNEW! |
Ivory chapter 6 . 7/12/2011 Love the end. "O-O what did Yami just say?" XD HILARIOUS! I LOVE THIS FIC You rock! JOEY/TEA FOREVER! |
Paeng chapter 20 . 1/11/2008 Wow wow! My first time to read a tea/joey story and seems pretty interesting~ No! More than interesting! Haha. Well, well... anyways! Please, Please update soon! |
Rewind Soldier chapter 20 . 11/26/2006 holy whee and 1/2. this was simply too great... one HUGE problem though... you stopped writing... COME BACK! I BEG YOU! yea youre an awesome writer, keep going! woo! |
ashley chapter 20 . 10/3/2006 oh dont stop this is really good it was like a book i couldnt put it down and u should write more |
Lily10 chapter 20 . 7/30/2006 Although the plot is not a very original idea and there's a few grammatical errors, this story could've been a lot worse. But one thing that personally bothers me is how you substitute an "a" with an "uh" whenever Joey speaks. I know he's got a Brooklyn accent in the dub but still...(just a hangup of mine). Also, the constant author notes popping in throughout every chapter is a bit distracting for me and kind of disrupts the flow of the story. Maybe you could keep them at the end? Just a suggestion. As well, I find it hard to believe that Tea agrees to pretend to be Joey's girlfriend so easily, that Yugi is THAT clueless and that Kaiba would somehow become so juvenile and meddlesome as to taunt Tea about telling Yugi about her and Joey. I think you're doing a pretty decent job though :) Overall, the story is an enjoyable read- keep it up! |
joeyxtea lover chapter 14 . 7/18/2006 PLEASE update! this story is amazing you can't stop updating all your joey/tea fanfics rock so please keep writing more and update this one! |
kirstin chapter 20 . 7/16/2006 sorry that review was for the WHOLE story it looked like only ch 1 sorry bout that |
kirstin chapter 1 . 7/15/2006 ok I know you haven't updated forever, but please update soon i love this story SO much! I've always wanted to see Tea and Joey together. You should really write more fanfictions about them. Your really good at this and I'm so into the story so PLEASE update! |
chibidragon chapter 20 . 6/17/2006 I'm hooked. One of the best stories that I have ever read. You have definately made me a fan of this pairing, so please update soon! |
cherryblossoms24 chapter 20 . 5/6/2006 Okie I've Five things to say...First, That was totally wicked! Your story is so awesome! Second, Kaiba is such an Ass! He should rot in hell for making Joey and tea's life misreble! Third, Please don't be offened but I don't like YugiXTea or YamiXTea fanfics but I read your fics about them and I say it's not really bad. Fourth...Make more JoeyXtea fanics! XD and Lastly, Update soon! |
cindy chapter 20 . 1/28/2006 I love this story so much, please update as soon as possible;the wait is killing me. |
googlebear chapter 20 . 1/28/2006 I think that this story is really great. It has romance and just the right amount of drama to not turn it into one of those over-drasmatic soap-operas. I also think that you kept them pertty much in character. I can't wait to read the update! |