Just so you know, it would help immensely if we knew whom was speaking. The dialog is very confusing as it jumps around from 1st person POV to narration, leaving you scratching your head and re-reading to try and figure out whom is saying what ! The actual plot is amusing and could be a bit more entertaining if not for these little irritations.

I have to say that am a huge fan of this fic

but its completely different of how its suppose to have been

Eiri was practically impotent

cant have sex, cant look in the females faces cause he feel bad, sick

and now he wanted to fuck

your fic used to be more dark

i wanted more eiri obession

shu flirting, important, anybody loving him

and!

it was confusing

didnt understand anything at all

sorry for my bad english

i still love your fic, and have it in my list of best gravi fics ever

I was happy wen i saw it again

good look! and...more more

omg! you've updated...like really updated...When i saw the alert i was like wth? Really?

You're story is one of those few ( i mean really few) that i could remember clearly without even reading all over again (I'm quite forgetful, so that would mean a lot)...it actually feels like i've just read it yesterday...

Okay...hehehe sorry for fangirling...now back to the main topic...hm...well I got lost in some part of it...i really don't know why...or maybe i'm just stupid (hahaha just woked up and all just a few minutes ago...so it must be it). I think it was the part where Shuichi came in after Eiri's fight...or before it...or whether it was really a fight...wha sorry my brain couldn't function well, so if you could be a dear and helped with figure it out. Sorry.

Though all in all, good chapter. Quite a cliffie...but wth...you've udpated that's all that matters. *bows head* update soon, please?

SPON-SAMA! ABOUT TIME YOU UPDATED! ;O; I was just about to pass this story into my hard drive as one of the many forgotten and abandoned ones and then you come like an angel and WHAM! new chapter *clings* I love you~ please don't leave us poor readers hanging for another... two years?

Very nice! Not what I was expecting from the new chapters... I was actually hoping for more smut, lemons, etc. but this is good too! I can feel the story moving along, starting with the scandal and their pasts and more. I'm really looking forward to seeing this story's progress! I'm glad you haven't abandoned it. And don't worry. Your writing style is awesome!

I fluctuate between good and bad writing style. I have to be "in the zone" for writing to write well. If not, then it turns out to be crap. And your writing is anything but. It's still super good and I'm really looking forward to the next update!

I hope everything in your life is going well!

*cries* Discontinued? This story was so amazing too! oO

Ma! I LOVE this story! I think it's my favorite one right now! I know you're probably not gonna update it, but I hope you will! Keep up the good work. _

hey htis is pretty good

r u gonna continue it?

have you abandoned this story. you havent updated in a while. I want to read more!

aww pooh. no more chapters? awesome story. hm.. well i dont really see anything really needing improvment in the story. there was some grammtical errors but thats it. anyways just wanted to tell you, i love your story and if you ever read this review can you please update?

Wow.. love the story! I wish you would update - can't wait to see some yxs!

Wonderful story so far.

that was freaking awsome you have to update soon.

This looks really promising! I'm glad to have found this fic. I have a feeling that it's gonna be really good. Thanks for the good read and I can't wait till your next update.

So..., if this is "To Be Continued," how come it hasn't been, yet? You've had nearly a full year!

I hope you haven't lost the spark/muse for this fic, because I really like it, and judging by the number of reviews, so do many other people. I think it would be great if you could write more, so please try!

It is a terrific fic, in my estimation. Good characterization, an unfolding plot, and juicy yaoi - what's not to love?