Please update

So sad that this story, by all means, ends here. It isn't really good and different from what's usual. Thank you for your writing.

I like the way you use youki in this story

Of course he'd lick his finger. I love the way you portray his personality, he seems real.

What a cliff hanger!

Shes Afraid of her own strength

You're doing really good with this story. I love curious Sesshomaru.

Omg, this is so much better than expected. Thank you!

You have a really unique story here. I’ve read a lot of SessxRin and I love the idea of them both as teenagers coming of age and exploring love for the first time together. The pacing of the story is fine, only I wish it hadn’t ended right before the good fluffy parts came hehe. If you ever decide to pick it up again (which I really hope you dooo!) I have an idea to share with you about how you can transition their relationship to the next level. You can PM me if you want it :) Thank you for sharing this great story with us so far!

It's been seven years...I'm pretty sure this story is dead...but to the writer, I hope you can make a comeback. You're a great story teller and this story has a lot of potential it deserves to be completed.

Your story is pretty interesting up until now.. I can't wait to finish it.. But it's already 3.07 am here.. So I have to save the rest for later.

I really like how you have Rin. She's very much in character and i like how you have her thought process for humans and demons being very similar to how she thought of them in the anime... and honestly, I think that's why her and Sesshoumaru are so good for each other because they pretty much feel the exact same way towards humans- Rin because her family was killed and torn apart by them and Sesshoumaru because of how things turned out with his father and human step mother... I can't wait until they start becoming closer in this story! Also, I'm very curious how Rin's training is going to turn out with Tsubaki and speaking of, I like how you have her in this as well. :) I'm pretty darn sad that I'm coming up to the last chapter you have for this right now and I REALLY hope you update for this story soon because I am completely hooked on it! :)

Just as it was getting to a turning point... it’s really disappointing to find a story, get so fond of it, only to have it stopped so suddenly.
I really hope you continue, you are a very well versed storyteller.

You know, Kikiyo kind of reminds me of Tsubaki but she still is fighting the battle against Darkness and seems to be doing the best she can not to give in completely to it like Tsubaki did..
Anyways, I am loving this story and I can't wait to see what happens between Rin and Sesshoumaru next. :)

I hope you would have completed the story since you said that you will. I hope you will come back to it even after so many years. This story is excellent to be honest.