Very well written.

Hm...this could have been a nice little fic. Your characterisation is sound enough, but I'm afraid I found your writing style somewhat...distracting. To me it feels almost forced and over fussy in places, distracting from the theme, which has its charm in its simplicity and so at times feels a little drowned out by the busy and somewhat forced descriptions. Don't feel the need to over flourish and 'over egg the cake' so to speak, as often these type of stories have their appeal in their actual simplicity and purity...a good theme doesn't need keeping afloat by overdone narrative. Other than that, I can see from your writing that you have it in you to be a very nice fanfic writer :-)

K

P.S. It's a shame you feel the need to add a signature that is derogatory to another style of writing that isn't your own...remember, tolerence, respect for other people's choice of expression, and an open mind is the key to creativity :-)

Thank you for your wonderful review of "It Could Never Be Remus". I thought I'd return the favor by reading something of yours and I was delighted to find you write LOTR too! It's my new favorite besides HP! A wonderful little filler for ROTK and well-written overall. Nice fic! :-D

ah...long time no read.-your stuff I mean. Really, really lyrical here. Its a good one-shot, short and sweet and poignant. Sorry, I really have nothing constructive to say. Its late, I be sleepy.

Oh that's just lovely. i can't decide whether to cry or just sit here smiling. Wonderful descriptions of Aragorn and Frodo's distress.

That was lovely... like a nice wholesome warmth for the reader, I have to say.

Good fanfic!I really liked this one.I liked it a lot!Hope you read mine!
-Nikki