great story, only next time mabey ditch some of the big words, it's not a dictionairy! the plot was eventhough amazing!

skillfully written.

this little fic has a smooth prose which is somewhat rare when I browse through archives... and for that I really enjoyed it :)

also, what else is good about this is that you're introduced the possibility of a draco/ginny shipping and that makes it very alluring and suspenseful.

yet sweet enough to keep us happy :)

well done

Hehe, a nice complex Draco... it's rather rare, so I apreciate it...

ANd Ginny is well impersonated too in my opinion.

*applauds*

Interesting idea I admire your work

I wanna see Draco's drawings! Haha. That was well written. I enjoyed reading it.

*Aqua Blue

Oh! That was so lovely! Well done!

Helen x

Very good story!

This is such a sweet story. I enjoyed it completely and thank you so muc for the dedication...I'm glad we've corrupted you. See they are perfect to write together. Sigh. Good job hun.

Very nice. It's rather upsetting that it's only a one shot but still very good.:D

I really liked this!

this is such a cute story, i really do like it... so sweet :o)

This was actually well done. Most standalone fics don't get much recognition on , but I chanced this one and ended up enjoying it. Makes me curious as to where it went though, farther along the road.
Oh, I checked your profile, since the name Sabriel is rather noticable. I love Garth Nix too. Amazing author.

Yah, there's no hair for you to mess up. But I would really like to see the rest of them some time...
Anyhoo, excelent story! It's rather sad that it took you writting a D/G story for me to actually read anything. I plan on doing it still. I have my heart set on that T/G one... But yes, it was great. The hair brushing was so sweet! I don't think I have ever read that one before. You have this excelent way of getting into the character's heads in this realistic way. And don't be so hard on yourself for the dialogue. It was very wity (does that have two "t"s? Too tired to check). I am going to have to cut this though because my eyes are demanding sleep. Poop on that.
Tiny Q

Aw..that was lovely. Normally I dont like when Draco seems so civil, but the way you wrote it was completely convincing! It was very good; you are a talented writer. Keep it up!

Cute story. Very well written! Good emotions. Ginny's written very well. Draco was so cute - bruhsing and braiing her hair! That's something only a talented writer could manage to pull off without making it corny and stupid, but you pulled it off brillantly so you should be very proud of yourself!