I'd join . . . If you were still here. Can I still be considered part of it? THIS IS AMAZING!

THANK YOU THANK YOU SO MUCH I HAVE BEEN LOOKING EVERYWHERE FOR A FANFICTION LIKE THIS IS SO AMAZING!
This - this is - it's AMAZING!

Maybe you should have changed a little more about Sirius's parts in the fight, because he seems to have recovered completely in parts of it even though he could barely walk in the previous chapter.

I don't entirely understand why Sirius couldn't go to St. Mungo's. After Fudge realised Dumbledore had been telling the truth all along, they all accepted that he'd also been right about Sirius. I guess it could have taken a while to convince them, but you'd still think the matter was urgent enough not to risk him dying because they didn't send him there.

I'm glad Sirius is all right, but I don't get why you had them make up with Percy ahead of time, since none of the stuff that happened differently should have affected that.

Great story!

It's Great! Please Please Please don't kill Sirius! He's too awesome to die!

Cool idea and thanks for writing.

SO cute i love it but why didn't harry tell Sirius that he loved him, that would have been a heart breaker huh?

Hey,

Lovely idea there, I know theres a lot of people who think that's how the story really should have gone. Atleast I do. ;) Anyway, I enjoyed reading it and I'll make my way over to the sequel you spoke of in your Author's Notes to check that out as well.

Best Wishes,

Kimi

Ha ha, jst read ur little note at the bottom of the chapter..ok...sorry...scrap previous reviews...I was only defending THE BEST CHARACTER EVER!
Lol, anyways, interesting 2 see where ya goin with this cos the moment it's very like the book...not that that's a bad thing...but u cld do anything next...even kill...ahem. Yeah, but I like it and now u've got done the whole prophecy explaining shit, hopefully u can do some more of ya own stuff. Luck dude.
;)

Ok, yeah that was good. Like how u adapted the book but erm...do u hav to kill sirius? There's like, so many other worthless, irritating characters *cough* SNAPE *cough*. I mean, how about Voldemort...that wld save everyone a lot of trouble dude...you have the power ;)

Wahey! Very good man...but don't u dare kill him or I'll get u ... thank u O :)
BRMC ;)

I loved it! I'll certainly have to check out your other fic! By the way, this is what is for, to write about what you think should or wanted to happen. I'm glad you realized this!

an ending! lol. I loved this fic! The fact that Sirius got to live was a huge bonus and the ending was good! Can't wait for the sequel hope to read it soon! Well gotta go sorry its not as long as last time but II dont have much time keep writing! Love Mellaithwen x