This is really making me curious in negative way!. Why overpower Naruto in many advanced techniques then you let him beat up by Neji only using Jyuuken and Hakken techniques.?!
Naruto fight Zabusa really well and Orochimaru too, before he used his Tenkun no buki weapons! On Kiba's part i totally understand, because he was still recovering from his own injury using those same weapons.
So, why making him weak here after those rigorous training from his Aunt? I don't really understand.

It's a bit wordy and boring to read but overall the plot is quite nice.

Nice chapter except that part at the end where Naruto suddenly just knows Jiraiya is a pervert and irresponsible just from looking even though he is only 6. Also why Iruka was allowed to know who Narutos father is. I hope this is not indicative of the rest of the story.

the length of your author notes at the beginning are a bummer.

Great story.

not a spanish name. putting a instead of o does nothing

Why did Naruto bother with the note to Sasgay at all? He doesn’t give a shit about passing.

You must have really low standards for jounin level because naruto is not jounin level he is nothing with out his weapons badly better than the canon one and that can be okay just do not ever say he is jounin level

Are yo kidding me naruto is DuPont be Jonnien level in your story right and he is having trouble with Kiba he should not have to use the kubbi chakra I know I sound like a naruto fanboy but please he says he would down ages ago if not for those two Fox’s well I have got information someone who would have trouble with Kiba would be down in seconds with Orochimaru naruto would not last that long unless he could barley move. If you want him to have trouble with Kiba don’t have Him hold his own even for a while against Orochi- freaken-maru

too poor

The story was pretty good and the OCs were great. Ruuri and Kaga were pretty cool characters and the concept of a Air Nin village sound great too. Naruto's personality was really fitting and Sakura ended up becoming a great character.

There are several aspects I enjoyed about the story:
A strong and smart Naruto, while not being too overpowered.
The relationship between Kyuubi and Naruto, it's very love-hate and I definitely love that.
Naruto having some family, especially a single person he can trust.
The training Naruto did with Kaga, Ruuri, and Jiraiya is one of my favorite things about this story, because Naruto is drawing powerful from multiple sources.
I like the family vs friends aspect in this story, and the importance of trust between both. Also, the impact in destiny in Naruto's life, his friends, Konoha, and the Hidden Air village.
NaruHina pairing, I will be honest I'm a sucker for this pairing, but I'm glad it didn't take priority over the story. Though I will say, I was hoping for a bit more NaruHina moments, like 1-2 more scenes at least.
Somewhat, happy ending.
Nice transitions, grammar, and character development.

Like anything, there will be some things I didn't quite enjoy either:
-It can get a bit boring from time to time because of the canon scenes.
-The story feels like it's becoming a bit too OC centric.
-Too little dialogue at least in at least half the chapters.
-Naruto's blood limit wasn't that interesting to me.

As I said this story was great. It definitely was an interesting read and while it has flaws, it's worth looking reading. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.

This was a pretty good ending for book 1 (or this story), but I'm a bit afraid that Naruto signed the contract. I'm hoping it doesn't take the end of the sequel for him to break out of it. It's even more surprising that he signed the prophet contract rather than the one for the breeding house (at least there is some freedom there). My only complaint is that I kind of want a bit more dialogue. Other than that, this story was well written.

I like how you didn't make Neji fight completely on par with Naruto in the Naruto vs Neji fight. Naruto trained significantly more, so I would expect him to be stronger.

Thank you for providing the list of jutsus in your story. I'm glad that Naruto's has jutsus besides the Rasengan, you provided him with a nice versatile arsenal

That sakura bashing in the beginning was worth it, because she has grown to become a great character now. I actually find her own developments interesting. Also, this story has been awesome so far. I will say that it is a bit tiring with many of the canon scenes being regurgitated, but if you attempted to only place the scenes that did change, then you would basically being doing most of the main canon scenes. I love the Naruto portrayed in this story too, he still normal self, but that cynicalism (probably not a real word) and his straight to the point attitude makes him a better character. Especially, since he isn't completely stupid, but I wish he still wasn't as dense because I want some damn shipping (lol).