Would you ever consider continuing the story with the new information given in DragonBall Super?

Does Gohan have Potential Unleashed?

After reading for this long I have to ask. Where's Piccolo?

You know, your story, while pretty good, has some inconsistencies. Someone, I don't remember who, said that even if Vegeta was still at level four, he wouldn't be a match for ammit. However, not only is akira a newly transformed ss4, which means he doesn't have the full potential of the form, but he was kicking his ass. That is inconsistent.

Just ten thousand years? If thats it, then dude, the kais would have heard of them

No that is wrong. It is not temporary. If gohan had trained, it would have been permanent

Uh, you said trunks and goten. Not trunks and gohan

Okay yes I read your explaination, but akiras base power had to be HUGE compared to vegetas and gohans, and vegeta, as we all know, is ALWAYS training

Okay. Dude, I don't know if you have ever gone back over this story or not, but if akira in his NORMAL form, can stand up to GOHANs super saiyan 2 form, then his power as a super saiyan must be astronomical. Did you never figure that into your equations? I have read both of your stories dozens of times

A Princess Bride reference? Loved it! I certainly am glad that I decided to stomach the Gary Stu-ness of Akira, otherwise I would have missed a thoroughly entertaining fanfic. You've also made Akira thoroughly distinct from Goku, so I must humbly apologize for the things I've said about you. You're anything but the sick, deprived individual I accused you of being in my review of chapter 28. Anyone who liked Princess Bride can't be all bad in my back. Maybe 'mostly bad', but certainly not 'all bad'.
I also approve of Krillin getting the final blow. It's about time the Krill-Master got a notch in his belt. The use of Trunks' sword feels like an allusion to the Saiyan Saga where Krillin has Yajirobe's katana ready to finish off Vegeta, only he was actually able to do so.

Good job showing the tactical genius of Vegeta in battle. If you could consistently output such quality chapters, I'd rank your story amongst the gems the Neo-Z Fighter community endorses.

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….… ….… Okay, well, I called it. It was the only thing that made logical sense. Now I'm going to have to castigate you not for making a Gary Stu (at least not one that isn't canon) who defies logic, but for having a sick, sick mind. I was NOT expecting to encounter incest in a T-rated fic. What kind of a depraved mind does it take to create a pairing between a grandfather and granddaughter? I hope you're seeing a good therapist.

The ship Goku took to Namek only took 7 days… but then again that was technically to Old Namek, I don't think that it was ever mentioned how long it would take to reach New Namek by spaceship.
Okay, so let me get this straight. Akira is able to learn in more or less a day a technique that took Goku (who was able to use a Kamehameha — something that took Master Roshi a half century to master — after seeing it once) at least a few weeks to master? What the fruit is going on with Akira? Is Akira like… a reincarnation of Goku? Because that is the only explanation I can think of that would be feasible. If Battle of the Gods had been out by the time, maybe that would allow for how absurdly over-powered Akira has become, but this was years before that movie was out.
And if Akira is somehow Goku, that would be wrong on so many levels.
Absurdly powerful, able to pick up techniques that take even fighting geniuses a while, and ABSOLUTELIY NO EXPLANATION why and how this ludicrous Gary Stu exists in sight.

Okay, so a basic, untrained Super Saiyan Akira is somehow stronger than Super Saiyan II Vegeta. There had better be an explanation for this, or Akira is definitely a Gary Stu. Well, MORE of a Gary Stu.

Never read a fan fiction... Already hook ya bastard haha