Nice. Are you going to continue?

He he, nice.

I thought you wrote it was going to be a seven part in the first chapter. Did you change that?

Love Lora

Very good! And I love the description of dance, being a dancer myself.

PLEASE UPDATE SOON!

~Annmarie

Aw...sweet!

This needs updates - both on TF.N and here! Please do something about it!

oh shut up skywalker. heheheheheheheheh.
update.

This was good. You got to love Mara, she is just not going to let her guard down for Luke. Not at this point anyway! Can't wait for more.

Aw,how cute.I love L/M romance.

cute. I like.

*snicker, snort* Ahh the flashbacks to high school that this little tale brings back. Heh, I do have to wonder, is this just the pre-lude, or was that the entire piece? Either way, it was humourous and well written, and addresses Mara's character brilliantly.

Lol, Cute. I love little stories like these. Write more!

Wonderful, simply wonderful!
"Just a few more meters and my journey would be complete."
No, somehow, I have the feeling it is only beginning! Not that that required any prescience on my part...you said there'd be six more of these! LOL!
So, when can we expect the next one? :D

HI! GREAT STORY! JUST ONE PART I WANTED TO COMMENT ON-WHY MUST EVERYOND TEAR DOWN WALLS? YOU KNOW, MOST WALLS HAVE DOORS! OR AT LEAST WINDOWS! YOU DONT ALWAYS NEED TO TEAR DOWN, SMASH THROUGH, OR BLOW UP THE WALL-JUST FIND A DOOR [OR WINDOW], UNLOCK IT, AND GO THROUGH! NO NEED TO DE SO DESTRUCTIVE!
OKAY-IM DONE RANTING NOW! I REALLY LIKED IT!

Wonderful! I can't wait for more. Once again a well written story.