Needs paragraphs to be readable.

LOVE IT x

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I WANT TO KNOW WHO THE DUMP DEATH EATER SOON

Evil Author!

i hate cliffies! UPDATE!

cya

DK

Yes, my friend, I actually read it. I only have one question: WHY! *ahem* excuse me. But, really, I think it would be great if you incorporated a bit more about why she turned Death Eater in the first place (hey, good place for character development *wink wink, nudge nudge*). Overall, great angst story. Now, one minor thing. LUCIUS! OH MY WORD! *coughs lightly* Please excuse me. I...need to get that fixed. Good job, and keep it up! Although it's not my favorite genre, I support you completely (and hope you take no offence at my words). I'm sure Naraku would be amused by you (trust me. From him, that means a lot)! *smiles and bows deeply, in respect* Wonderful job. _

Rachael my love,

Dear lord! Hermione is on the dark side! NO! oh dear lord the tears are springing forth freely! and FYI, if J.K. Rowling doesn't put Ron and Hermione together in a romantic way, i will go into a severe state of depression, lock myself in my room w/ sherbet ice cream and my cell phone, bawl my eyes out, and get fat off trying not to go mad with grief.

great story, bebe! Keep it up!

Love Always~ La Reine Citronne

So, WHO IS THE DEATH EATER? And where is this story going? I ASK YOU BELLIGERANTLY! (I love that word)(I should use it more)

Signed,

Your favorite Insufferable Quidnunc

Queen of imladris-
I DO NOT APPROVE! Lucius and Hermione! ThAT IS SICK AND TWISTED! What are you thinking! You strange, horomonal obsessive LOTR freak! YOu FRIGHTEN ME IMMENSELYY! O MI GOD THAT IS SO WRONG! AGAIN I DO NOT APPROVE!
Sickened,
flowrchild238

When was Snape's birthday and how was the cake?
I'm glad that I'm in your history book, hehe. This chapter was very well-written, I'm sorry I haven't been on in awhile, life is just a wee bit hectic a la moment.
Anyway.
HERMIONE AND LUCIUS? urgh. Well, I'm still going to read.
Ta.

WOW! I LOVE THIS! Please keep this up!

Like I said before! KEEP WRITING! I truly think you have a gift for writing girl! Never stop!

Good Story. Should be longer. I enjoyed it immensly. Leaves me wondering. Great cliffhanger. Please write more

Wowza bowza! What's with Hermione joining el Voldey? Woosh. Very intense. I enjoy even though I'm sort of depressed. Are you going to update? I'm curious. Well written, and the only criticism I have to make is the blob format you wrote it in. Did you post it HTML or normal doc form? Try to space the paragraphs out (for future reference.) I'm plopping this in fav stories.