Reviews for butterfly in nine laps : shiori |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this is the eater of unagi from lj P in any case, i think i avoided the butterfly in nine laps series because of the potentially high squick factor? but i'm glad i decided to brave it...esp for this chapter, since literally every sentence was perfect. i might have mentioned before in some of your other stories (the naruto ones, i think) that the imagery sometimes conflicts w/ the story's tone (although i'm sure it's probably deliberate seeing as how it's luc court we're talking about)...but here. omg. "the door shut behind him with a click like a gun being cocked." so perfect. and that first paragraph. the vaginal bisected rose heart thing. and menstruating shiori. i'm half wtf and half in awe. |
![]() ![]() Dirty and disturbing. The imagery of the dead pretending to live through photography stuck. As did the vagina dentata. This fic was sick, strange, and twisted. Where's the next chapter? |