Reviews for What If? |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OH! HOW SAD! Ron . . . Procrastination ruins peoples' lives, I tell you! It ruins peoples' lives! Butterfly Effect was one whacked out movie . . . It was pretty good though . . . but very whacked out. That's the only angsty role I've seen Ashton play . . . He did well. ~ Oasis |
![]() ![]() great story spoof off your story is great too!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG. My story is the long version of this. That's so weird. I'm a big R/H shipper. It's funny how Ron is always the one who missed his chance to be with Hermione. It's never vice versa. Hm, I think I got a new idea for a story. I'll stop rambling now. I liked your story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very intense-poor Ron |
![]() ![]() Wow. I guess 'short and sweet' really is true. So short yet so sad, poor Ron. I'm going to cry *sniff* Na, but wow, very good. U should make a long story bout this. And i can't believe how little people reviewed. Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Interesting twist there. I am assuming she ended up with Harry instead? Very well done! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm.. You know you could make a story out of this and this could almost be the summery or a prologue. Seriously! You could write about how he deals with it or somthing (that would be the shorter one, or if this chapter was actually the shortened version of the story that you would tell then it would be cool) You have the skills! Great story anyway! *sobs* so sad... and poor Ron! Oh and at the end did she marry Harry? because you said friend... so thats what I was thinking, but... It was good! ~luna~ |
![]() ![]() WOW. Good expression of feelings. I know almost every story u have written. Its good even if its short |
![]() ![]() wow that was really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a very good story. I can't beleave that more people haven't reviewed it. You've done a great job with expressing his feelings, even if it is short. Hydra-Star |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw, that's so sad.. love Tanya J Potter |