I think you should update even your style of writing is different then what am use to. But overall it is a very good story. Chloe is a bit mary sueish but compare with other ocs she is very unquie.

Great Story! Can't wait to read more!

Hello, by all means continue your story and if you still have problems with the mutant thing, then go to my profile and message me. I'm a total X-Men, MutantX, and anything with odd powers fan! If you want a beta, I'm offering that as well.

Please continue.

Lady

Great story. Keep up the good work and update soon!

Then two are funny, Chloe and Aragorn that is. Please update soon...It's been over a year and a half! Have you abandoned it? If you have, then you outta take it down. Though, I think this fic is lovely so far and I think you should continue updating it.

Navaer!

I like this story...very original, there's nothing that should be changed. Keep Writing!

is this gonna be aragornoc? i think that's cool. post more soon

*chuckles*
Very nice luv.
I look forward to more.
Am _

Cool! Kewl! Kool! Write and post more ASAP! ;-)

Ok, good chapter. So does she know about LOTR? I mean Elves don’t surprise her and she knows who Boromir is and that the ring is evil.
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I’m not going to point our any mechanical errors this time only because I’m being lazy. I would like to see what part she plays in LOTR and why she is actually needed. You know, when Nightcrawler teleports, he goes into another dimension... A dimension with dinosaurs or something. So why did she end up in ME? There has to be another reason.
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Well, keep up the good work..

That first sentence in chapter 3 should be broken up into two sentences.
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Change “tear drops

It’s “croaked

please update soon!

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Kewl! Post more soon! :-)