ADD MORE PLEASE!

I liked it please update soon.

Wasn't so fond of Emma having such a big part in a story this size, but the Jack/Riddick story was breathtaking. Bravo!

Well done! I'm very impressed.

I absolutely love this! So realistic of how I'd picture these two trying to pick up the pieces after the events of PB.

This is VERY good! So well written. It brought tears to my eyes a couple of times. I really hope that you pick it back up again soon. Ill put it on my alert list and cross my fingers.

six years since you've updated... but have to give you thumbs up on fantastic writing. Be you are a professional writer now!

congrats.

If you ever choose to keep going with this fic, I'll read it becasue I love the way you write.

Very nice story you have! its great! Catches both Riddick's emotions AND Jacks. Just got into the Swing of the stories after i saw TCOR it was REALLY good

So, are you still going to continue this? 'Cause I really hate it when good stories are abandoned. This is an excellent story woth good characterization and grammar, and an interesting plot to boot. I really hope you continue this.

PLZ UPDATE!

... its been 2 years, are you going to update? i would really like it if you did

jsyk

~tweaty

i love ths story! it's AWESOME!

Please you must write more, I have never been more excited to wait for an update. Plus this story is keeping me on my toes, I hope you keep up the job well done. Also this story sounds fantastic, so PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE ASAP.

It is really good. I cant wait for the next part to be posted.