Too too much angst.

This story is truly is the first one I've read were the twins were not just pranksters, and it's fun to see them get annoyed so easily with her. I think you also portray Buffy perfectly both in her mood swings and how others can be so easily annoyed with her antics while finding them endearing. There is a reason she has so many friends, she pulls people in without trying and I think you've really shown this. I hope you return to this story one day, even if it has been 7 years. But even left incomplete it is still a truly compelling story. Great job.

Your formatting for this chapter stinks. Putting more than one space between words makes it hard to read a sentence without it feeling choppy. It also hurts my eyes because I'm so used to proper spacing my eyes kept unconsciously searching for the next word only to find empty space. I don't understand why you went from normal to an italicized font but that also made it difficult to read.

Its so bad that I've decided to stop here. If a writer can't do something as basic as good formatting then they don't deserve my attention.

I know you must have a busy life and that writing fanfiction is probably the last thing on your mind but I thought id give this review a try and inspire you to continue this story. It is SO good and it would be a tragedy if it was never finished. Your story line is so intriguing and I loveee the relationship between Buffy and legolas! I hope willow will stop being so crazy and leave Buffy to her elf and arda happiness! And I love you for being so talented! Lol of there is anything else I can say to flatter you let me know! :D

yay... craving to read more

Hope to hear more of this story

Going to finish this story, right? This is a great story and it wouldn't be right to end it like it is now

have you dropped this story?

I sincerely hope that this will be updated soon! The language and the way you meld dialogue from two very different sources was extremely well done, and a pleasure to read.

Hope to see an update of this great story!

Hey! Um...this is not actually a review of your story (I will read it though, it sounds interesting) I would love to have you be my beta on Linked, but I can't seem to send you a PM so if you could e-mail me at we could talk about it. Just make sure to say who you are in the subject line because I'm careful about what e-mail I open.

A masterpiece. Wonderful finc. I hope someday you get around to finish it. I love Dawn's instant aprehension towards the sphere and you did a wonderful job with Willow. Its hard to work with her during the "magic-addiction" ordeal. Many authors either make her evil downright or annoyingly winny but you got her right on.

Interesting, so Buffy has become unable to die or rather resilient to death. Can't wait to see how the meeting at Rivendell plays out.

I came upon this by accident. And this is the first time I have read a crossover story, a Buffy and Legolas pair... And i like it alot. I really hope that you finish this... either way, I would just like to say thank you for writing this story. :)

I came upon this by accident. And this is the first time I have read a crossover story, a Buffy and Legolas pair... And i like it alot. I really hope that you finish this... either way, I would just like to say thank you for writing this story. :)