Goof: Terbium (Tb), an actual element but it's not radioactive.

thats tiberium not terbium i made the same mistake once

I will admit that the title and description left me a bit skeptical, however this was written and with the subtle references to Command & Conquer 1: Tiberian Dawn, sucked me in and entertained me. Love your work. Keep it up.

"GDI disc detected. To play the Brotherhood of Awesome missions, please insert the Brotherhood of Awesome disc."

You heard the lady. Insert another story!

Cool story there was only a few spelling mistakes and the grammer over all was pretty good

Actually, Terbium is spellt with an I (Tirbium.) and the only color of tirbium i've seen is green or blue. But then, I've only played Tirbium Sun before. Im not sure if theres another Tirbium game...

Read this one ages ago, and after reading less than half clicked. I liked this one, i'm pretty sure, after a while, I'll tell you I wasn't keen on it at the beggining but after the first few paragraphs I liked it.

Stupid! ME!

iv been reading for an hour and im only onto chapter 6 ;_; so far its great though but why are the crystals red? tiberium was always green or blue.

Ah fancharacters! Hiss!
Actually, I applaude you for giving them decent introductions, something most authors forget. The Comand & Conquer Tiberium thing is something I'd wanted to try once (perhaps one day I'll look into a tiberium infestation thing). You know it's strongly suggested in Tiberium Sun and the add-on that the tiberium is part of an alien plan to terraform the earth. Roll on the third C&C - Tiberium Twilight! (What happened to that? Nothings been mentioned or said, except 'yeah TT is the next C&C' and that was years ago)
Of course, you appear to have used the slightly different Terbium infestation. Tee-hee.
An actually quite well-written story.
(I'd like to criticise the lack of Sniverly - since it is SatAM - and new characters)
I think I've read some of your stuff before you know. You're pretty good, and have reminded me that I should return to my first calling and write a decent Sonic fic for once (as soon as my two big fics are out of the way...)

One word: Col

I Think this is the best story you have ever written. I am ur number 1 fan. Please keep writing stories like this!

This story was great! You should write solo stories about NiGHTS. I think you potray his character beautifully!

Oh yes! I love fics where the FF beat Eggman, but I've never read one like this! So... Robotnik no longer as control of Mobius, all the Robians can be de-roboticised, the Floating island is wrecked and the two mecha-clones are still out there! Brilliant! PS What's the difference between mecha's, robots and androids anyway?

Hmmm, well, first off: You're missing Visceroids! Nothing in this style is perfect without Visceroids! You're missing 'em! They're essential! But: GREAT WORK! Try giving Westwood that "green crystal" idea... If they like it, they might use it in TT(Tiberian Twilight)!

Wow this was a long won. Worth it though. I am also a C&C nut hehe. Anyway i loved this story.