It's so good to see more Earthian fics! Your story is great, but I could have sworn that Gabriel was a girl and that she was married to Micheal...oh well! I like this side of him/her! So demanding... Well, I'm off to read the other fic, Beginning of and Errand Rapheal/Rafeal(I guess it's spelt both ways...). Please add more chapters!
Your now loyal reviewer,
Your Evil Angelic Elven Lord and Master,
Saihitei Youko Seishuku