Was... Was that a PS:T reference?

I would love to see this story finished one day.

Hope Bastila sees that Revan IS the good guy real soon. And I hope that you, the author, update this story real soon too! And bring Meetra into the mix as well!

The alternate title outlines your story quite nicely.

I stand in awe of your skill with bitingly sarcastic comments. No, seriously, how do you DO it? It's GLORIOUS! This Revan is more awesome than anyone has ANY right to be! He's in character, hilariously sarcastic, a charismatic orator, an epic fighter, and the list just goes on! I know you haven't updated this in a long time, but I seriously hope you keep going on it! I'm not the only one either; you have over 100 other reviews! Of course, I get why real life concerns would take precedence over some fanfic, so if that's why you haven't updated, well, I suppose I'll just wish you best of luck with whatever is causing you trouble, and hope that one day you will have time again.

Really though, I think I speak for many people when I say I would love to see more of this. As you noted in your summary, there is a significant increase in quality after chapter nine, but you know, even the first nine chapters are better than a lot of stuff I see on this site. Anyway, here's hoping to see the return of the Great Master of Sarcasm!

I look forward to more :)

Nice to see some now chapters for this oldie. :)

Love the story hope it will not take to long to uppdate :P

Sweet, please keep it up. I really like this story

I can say without a doubt that your version of Revan has become one of my favourites by far. I love his caustic attitude and his heavy sarcasm had me grinning like an idiot. I also loved your version of Vrook, especially his opinion of the whole quest mission of the game.

I also have to say that I'm enjoying the bond that's growing between Revan and Bastila, it's been a while since I've read KOTOR fics but now I remember how much I loved this pairing.

I hope there's another update pending because this is definitely an awesome fic!

You know, I would've at least expected to get the name of the main character right. It is RevAn and NOT Reven. If wou want to write a fiction, make at least sure that you got the NAME right.

I can't be the only one that said that already.

wow ipresive a look at the kotor galixy i have never considerd and has very good writing keep it up

I really like your story so far. I thought in this chapter that Revan's taking Bastila's glass of water and drinking it in front of her was a nice touch, given her earlier struggle to reach for it to get a drink herself. Very humorous.

One comment to help you improve your writing (though it's already very good): Try putting extra space between paragraphs when changing scenes.

For example, you can use a - or .:. or some sort of separator between scenes. It makes the transition between scenes less confusing.

Otherwise, great story. Can't wait to read more!

Looking good, please update soon! :) It's nice to see how your storytelling style has evolved throughout the story. The few final chapters were really nice to read. I also like the "darker" Revan in this story.

Revan's bassery will not be denied!

Amazing story, eagerly looking foward to more.