i wasn't expecting a proposal. oh my god. there are so many levels to this that my head s spinning. is it real or not, you know? is he playing a game or not. what is happening. what is going on, dude

i love how you're balancing the greys of this; it's really wonderful

this is really good :(

i came here to cry, and boy, oh boy, did you deliver

I'm sorry this story was never completed. I quite liked it! Thank you for sharing.

I'm not sure I like this story. I much prefer stories that go in order. All this jumping back and forth in time is so confusing. I can't tell what's real and what's not. I hope this gets better as the story progresses.

I'm really liking what I see of the story so far! Of course, I don't think it's been updated since, what, '05, was it? I was just wondering if you had just lost inspiration, or maybe you just thought that people had lost interest, I don't know. However, should it be possible, I am very much interested in the continuation of this story. :)

what happened to the rest of the story? i was looking forward to this

Please update this story. Pretty please...:)

I know life takes a front row seat...but no update since 2005? Will this story have an ending?

This story is really good! :) please keep writing!

i love it. i cant wait for fudges reacions.

This story is like... WOW! I truly enjoy your characterisations and truly wish you would finish it, or at least post the link to this Meagan woman who is finishing it.

Thank you.

Love Sonia :)

i love your story so far! i hope you make other chapters soon...

If you get this...PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY.