I don't know if you ever intend to finish this considering how long it's been but this is good work.

Don't mark something as complete when it clearly isn't. Just because you have abandoned it doesn't make it finished. There is a reason for 'completed' to be a filter. Sometimes you want to read something that you know for sure is finished. You know this isn't finished you know you aren't going to bother finishing it.

...seriously!? You stopped there? Please continue!

NOOOOOO! Why is it completed?! And it got good too please continue

you realy should write more i really want to know what will happen in the morning

love it i command you continue

where is the rest of the story you can't just leave it at that?

Nice, but why mark it as a compleat story when has just started?

i was terrible dissapointed to see the third chapter of this story was the last

lol, great beginning.

ugh... you said you were going to do another chapter, but it says complete. so i think that complete sign should be taken off because you cant just end a story (that i getting to the good part) like that. i know its been a long time but can you please finish it... thanks.

where's the rest?

NO! # %& please update ASAP like ASAP i totally want to know what happens next please update soon

this story is really good but it isn't completed y does it say that when it is not completed? anyway great story update soon

um... were the rest of the story it says chapeter 3 but its also compleat it was just getting good ...wah were the rest ?