| Reviews for The Elemental Guardians, aka Voldemort's Mistakes |
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Jestersky98 chapter 1 . 11/15/2019 Please for the love of all that is holy do not start telling everybody about her future knowledge That is the one and only fucking rule to follow in every single story like these |
CaribbeanTrinidadian chapter 4 . 1/28/2019 Lady Marmalade was released in 1974. So it sort of ties in. |
Ahmed Maged chapter 1 . 10/1/2018 Nope Dropped |
Guest chapter 44 . 12/17/2017 Lol another stupid have to keep timeline idiocy. Author fiat bs. You’re just too bad of a writer to think up an original plot, so you don’t change anything with the SI because you can’t think of anything new to have happen! |
Linda Willows chapter 44 . 5/20/2017 ... Gah. This fanfic is... Just- bleh. |
Linda Willows chapter 44 . 5/14/2017 *snorts* ANOTHER freaking Mary-sue... Hinest |
Guest chapter 44 . 4/17/2017 pathetic and useless OC. She wakes up in the world of harry potter, knows the outcomes of the plot but doesn't do anything to stop the deaths of so many people in the series. Really? REALLY? Also, your main character is a complete mary sue. In the beginning, she aced all the tests (FIVE YEARS WORTH OF WORK) and only studied it for THREE WEEKS. Are you shitting me? And talking about shits, yeah, this story is cheesy and unrealistic and... well, shit. |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/17/2017 (-_-) this is shit |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/17/2017 Mary Sue alert. Mary Sue alert. Fucking Mary Sue alert. And really? FIVE YEARS OF SCHOOLWORK MEMORIZED IN THREEE WEEKS? ARE YOU SHITTING ME? (-_-) I really hate Mary Sues. Are there gonna be flaws in the OC? (Really hope so.) |
VenaHope chapter 36 . 11/24/2016 Harry Potter should be six. |
VenaHope chapter 18 . 11/24/2016 Uh, you do realize, they shouldn't be in school, right? Harry's Parents were 21 when they died. Also, Harry was born in July 1980. Hogwarts starts in September and, His Parents died on Oct 31 1981. Sirius Remus James and Lily are all the same age, hence forth, they should all be twenty, and Lily should have been married to James and Harry should have been born. |
Gerda Willows chapter 4 . 9/28/2016 I REALLY hate to say this, but... well... Kathryn Orenda is a mary-sue (and Mary-Sues REALLY get on my nerves). No, really. I mean, I think that you've made her out be TOO powerful. And WAY too smart. I mean, isn't memorizing five years of school work in three weeks stretching it a bit too far? And taking eleven tests and passing them with full marks in just THREE weeks? I find Kathryn Orenda a bit TOO perfect really. But seriously, don't take it personally.I've read some of this story's reviews and a lot of people love your story. This is just my honest opinion, that's all. I hope you don't take it too personally, Gerda Willows (the older twin of Linda Willows) |
Miraluc chapter 20 . 6/13/2016 A good song for Snape ( chapter 20) is I will always love you. Incredibly sappy, and Snape would be embarrassed as hell. |
colormeconfused chapter 1 . 10/1/2015 No sensible American likes Bush anyway. It's not like he won the popular vote back in the dayith and although Republicans want to blame all the bad stuff on Obama it was really the succession of Bushes (his father included) that truly caused so much trouble in the Middle East. Over oil! Which is not even a sustainable energy source. To make matters worse, another Bush is fecking trying to run. Sensible Americans are calling it quits, and by that I mean people over the age of 45 have decided to focus on the youth. Not effectively (because that would be to much wouldn't it). I have gone to many a lecture about how my generation will fix their (45 peeps) mistakes and take care of the environment and meanwhile a policy of exploitation and disparity continues. I curse all their houses, many thumbs are bitten in their combined directions. Sorry rant over, Charming story btw. Crazy that its been a decade. You probably will not ever read this. |
Laura chapter 25 . 8/26/2015 This is honestly one of the best books I've read, I so wish you could get this published! |