this was very good, when's the sequel coming? its been more than a year

Wow. I love that story. I couldn't stop reading. I really like how you portray Akito. He is not completely evil and heartless. I personally feel Rin is more evil than Akito,hehe. This is a rare pairing, but it totally works out. I love it. Keep on with your writing, but I'm sure you dont need yo be told that. :3

SWEET! Are you going to write a sequel?

This chapter was so cool. I can't believe Momiji is really gonna try and be friends with Akito. And, by the way, Momiji should know, of course it's worth it to help Akito. It's always worth your time. Geez, now I'm going all Dr. Phill on you. Sorry.

“You mean the thing with him and Akito being together? How fucked up is that,” Kyo said casually.

shgfjhds hehe. HARU IS OBVIOUSLY THE ONLY VOICE OF REASON HERE. "OH OUR SUPPLE YOUNG MOUMIJI IS SEXUALLY INVOVLED WITH THE MASOCHIST WITH ALL ENCOMPASSING POWER OVER US. OH WELL, CAN'T BE HELPED." THAT'S NOT ACCEPTABLE!

Akito knows everything that goes on, mostly because I tell him. SHIGURE. BITCH. Seriously, all of his adn ayame's lines are so fantastic, don't make me choose.

God. How great is it that Akito is like "You're such a useless punk. I'm so much more special than you. nngh. Make out with me" and moumiji does it. So this is what happens when your mom doesn't hug you and curses your existance.

“Well that’s ridiculous. We’re adults. It’s our job to make children do what we want.” IF SHIGURE ISN'T THIS MUCH OF A DICK IN THE MANGA, I LIKE YOUR SHIGURE SO MUCH MORE.

fdsgfsdhj AYAME IS SO RIDICULOUS I LOVE EVERY OUNCE OF HIM. like verything he says fskdjf "or when he doesn't want me to drive." You have his voice down very well. I do so adore you. OH MY GOD. I LIVE IN FEAR OF WHAT AYAME'S VOICE IN ENGLISH SOUNDS LIKE.

ah It might just be Kakashi, but I love Hatori.

djshda DID HE JUST ASK THAT PSYCHO CROSSDRESSER FOR A MOVIE DATE?

(except for Kagura and god, she doesn’t count) That's so bitchy, I love it.

dasjhd I love the fac that Haru just wadners arund and Kyo's like FUCKER I KNOW MY HOUSE COME BACK.

ahh! They kisses! Kyo, what a cockblocker, such a tease.

“Maybe he just likes to close doors.” *snort*

“You don’t need to interact with Akito unless it is necessary.” This sounds so terribly sad, even if I'm not at a point where I like Akito, even with the curse revealed, ect.

Yay! Sequel!

you know...

I think I'm going to go reread this whole thing again...

Yep!

i can't believe its over...hope you write a sequel!

But not a short one, but any sequel is a good one.

thanks for writing

Wings

Beautiful! Oh I loved it. And that even though you put Haru with Kyo and Yuki with Tohru in the exact opposite to everything that is just in this world (Haru/Yuki!) so you may be assured that you're an exceptional writer, for me to admit it through that.

The Akito/Momiji was actually... well, I never thought it'd be that... realistic? And cute.

The whole story was very poignant and comforting. What is it Cordy says on ANGEL... "I'm getting used to being creeped out and comforted at the same time." Something like that. Anyway, not creeped out as such, just. You know. Or not, but I can't say it right.

And P.S. - The Akito Spoiler strikes me as brilliant now I'm used to it, but I'll always love him best as he was, so thanks for keeping him... him.

*sniffles* That ending was so cute! I loved it! I am sorry that the story is finished though. Ah well...

But the idea of a sequel is brilliant, and I really hope that you do it. Your writing has got better and better since you started this story, and a sequel would just be fantastic. Your portrayal of Akito (my favourite character) is amazing, and I was so glad when I found out that there was an Akito/Momiji Fic out there. It's my favourite, if obscure, Fruits Basket pairing.

So yes please to a sequel, and good luck with all your future writing. I hope allyour Fics are as great as this one.

yeah! i'd love to read the sequel.