| Reviews for Pirates of the Caribbean:The Curse of Torn Love |
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   Dramaqueen247 chapter 10 . 8/11/2007 This sis the first time i will write a flame. that i will ever write a flame. i hated this. JE sucks! i sorry but this is too painful for me. im sorry. but i dont like this story. but i am sure i will like your other work. |
| laura chapter 10 . 4/4/2007 hello that was great well done, i was just wondering who wrote the one you said we must check out called finding the other and how do i find it ? |
| PirateLassy6-9-63 chapter 1 . 8/6/2006 I love this writing style, especially considering you wrote it in seventh grade. I also like how you switch scenes for Lizzie to Jack. It's almost like a movie. And his first sentence "Where's th' rum?" Classic. I love him to death. Well, I mean, not to death because I don't want to kill the man I love, but you know what I mean. Oh, Will was in Elizabeths bed! You must have been a perverted seventh grader. I didn't start writing about bed scenes until I was in at least fifth grade, and good ones until like 8th when I started role playing. Anyway, I enjoyed what I've read so far, you rockith like cake! -Kat O' Nine Tails (jdluva4evaneva) |
| Tiara Sparrow chapter 1 . 2/7/2004 'Ello, Now, this is an interesting way to start a story... Lookin' forward ta readin' more. Later mates, Tiara Sparrow |
| angelkeety chapter 10 . 2/6/2004 *sob and takes out a tissue - dabs her eyes* AHH THE RING *jumps into water, fetches ring, and keeps it* How rude of her. Rude rude rude. ( But-but the ring *cry* Great story, Sadie My One and...Only Glass Full of Milk. KEEP WRITING. I need to write a new fanfiction. |
| Q.AnnesLace chapter 9 . 1/31/2004 Aww, they fell asleep together! Really nice j/e interaction. I love how you are slowly revealing Jack's attraction to Liz, and vice versa. More soon! |
| Meaghan chapter 9 . 1/31/2004 Ok, I'm not as mad as a I was before! It is so sweet, I mean Jack and Elizabeth! Keep up the good work! |
| Kind reviewer chapter 8 . 1/27/2004 U're right! It is better off without Will. Not meaning to offend anyone but I think Jack is better. HURRY AND UPDATE! |
| Meaghan chapter 8 . 1/27/2004 What do you have against Will Turner? What makes Jack "better" for Elizabeth? I'm still hooked on your story even though I'm made about the Will thing |
| kissinginthebluedark chapter 7 . 1/27/2004 WHAT THE CRAP! I think you made me hyperventalate (I can't spell!)! At chapter 4 or 5, I thought I was gonna write something like "don't hurt Will, like you said many times- he's so innocent". but now I see I am too late! ( You better write more & make it end happy- PLEASE! (tear tear) Overall, though, excellent form. Great details & descriptions. Your writing form is very good. Keep up the good work, and please, make it happy... for me? Looking forward to up-coming chapters! Kaci Jo |
| Horsejumping2007 chapter 7 . 1/27/2004 OMG! i think i put lick instead of lucky*! hahahahahahaha lol! I'm so stupid * smashing head against desk * keep it comin saydee! I love it! |
| Horsejumping2007 chapter 8 . 1/27/2004 Saydee, u were right about the whole Will thing. I will always support u and ur writing! it it always a joy and suspenseful thing to read! I love how u write, throwing curve balls and unexpected things to happen! A friend is like a 4-leaf clover, hard to find, and licky to keep, u are truley a 4-leaf clover! |
| padme chapter 7 . 1/26/2004 Oh! PLEZ more more more it's soo amazing! |
| Haylee chapter 1 . 1/26/2004 hey wow this is ur first story? really impressive. i love it! keep going! i really like how ur so discriptive with your word choice and using the each of the characters different voice...awesome job i'll be reading this one most definitely! |
| angelkeety chapter 7 . 1/26/2004 Wo! *wipes tear from eye* Oh Willy, dear! I shall..well I shall throw yer body out to sea, and let the seagulls peck your eye-Okay, now I'm just getting disturbing. Kay, lovely story, continue, or I shall throw a rum |
