Beautifully written. I loved the way you described the look in Jiraya's eyes throuuh tsunade. It was just very heart wrenching this entire thing.

This is so hauntingly beautiful.

Ugh, you really hit me somewhere - DEEP. You really illustrate the tradegy of her life... good job!

This was so beautiful. This did write itself and I felt every word of it. The Sanin had such a tragic life. I'm so thankful to you for capturing Tsunade's feelings towards both her team mates so well.

This is honestly beautiful. I love the concept of this, & how well it conveys not only Tsunade's feelings of hope & of regret, but everyone's experiance of them. I think it could speak for many people, and you have made it work beautifully for Tsunade & Jiraiya. Tsunade's voice was lovely, & I think the part that Orochimaru plays in it, Tsunade's reflections on him really added to it. I felt the presence of all 3 of the Sannin in it, if that makes sense, & I think it completes the piece.

I also really love that it was just an ending and not the ending.

wow. this was quietly amazing. plus, love the e.e. cummings line - that man had a way with words, and so do you. :)

That's a good drinking buddy right there :D

Orochimaru, although I despise him, I can understand how the darkness was swallowing him whole and nobody was there for him. I like the contrast you did between him and Sasuke, between Tsunade and Sakura.

Its brilliantly done n I love it. Now if u excuse me, imma go read more of ur stufff :D

Wow. Just wow.

loved this story. )

*so emotional*

This is awesome! I loved it!

That was brilliant.

Love. I also like the multitude of possibilities - because while I love a happy ending, a totally free and clear happy ending for Tsunade and Jiraiya doesn't seem quite right. Not all the time, anyway. Thank you (even if this story is years old).

That went beyond epic boundries.:)

beautiful story, loved the ending

Woh. Goosebumps man.